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Great drawing, I especially liked the coloring. I am probably not the best critique but these are the points that, in my view, are a bit off. First I think ...

Great photo. I like how it has a feel of autumn although there is no clear indication that it is (such as leaf yellowing etc.). I also like how the ...

I want to start off with saying that I have liked the melancholy tone that is kept throughout the poem. I also got the feeling of what the character is ...

I did not sleep for five days or rather hundred and fifty hours and fifteen minutes give or take fifteen seconds. I cannot say that I have reached my limit ...

I must agree that for its size this poem has a large impact. The only aspect of this poem that I did not particularly like is that to me, it ...

The time has stopped, she came to visit And silently was standing by the door She did not move, nor spoke, nor made a sign But still I reached to ...

Interesting and engaging story. It would serve great as a prologue. I am a little confused about the structure of the "house" and the part where she jumped over a ...

I enjoyed reading this story. There are, however, a few aspects of the story that, in my opinion, could be improved. The story is told from a perspective of a ...

A nice, concise and interesting work. It reminded me of my Psychology class and the labs involved with it. The set up is very simplistic but also very effective and ...

The summer has finally arrived bringing with it the start of the blockbuster season. It looks to be an exciting year at the movies with big titles such as Transformers, ...

I enjoyed your story. It was well executed and as far as I can tell the grammar is good. The only misspelling that I noticed is " it true boot ...

Thank you for the post. I just found out about this from my morning news. Apparently the frequency and intensity of sun flares will rise until 2013. In 2013, as ...

That’s too bad. That’s the end. No hard feelings about it. Pictures broken, No more friends, Parent busy home. So go on, Leave me alone. I don’t want you here. ...

First of all good start. Like the reviewer above noted first two paragraphs feel too descriptive for the first few sentences of the story. You need to start with some ...

Pretty funny. I had a thing against squirrels back in high school. Overall, short and interesting. I understand that this piece was just for fun so I will just point ...