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  • Randomosity Re: post your voice

    Hello YWSers!!!!! *high fives* Hope you are having a wonderful day and sitting comfortably in front of your screens with multiple chocolate bars and a box of ice cream stowed ...

    Jun 20, 2013
  • Lounge, The Re: Post Your Pic Here [8]

    Hey guys and gals!!!! =D Was out in the rain but nothing could spoil the fun lololol So that's me with my youngest sister :3 She's adorable lololol

    Jun 3, 2013
  • Lounge, The Re: Guess the Number: Win Reviews!

    105 for me :)

    Aug 20, 2012
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Just Friends

    Hello. This work sounds pretty interesting. There are a few things, though, that could be improved. For some reason the sentence about masks, at the end of paragraph 2, sounds ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Is It Worth The Pain

    Hello. It would be interesting to read chapter 1, this segment reads like a prologue and for the sake of this review I will treat it as such. It is ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: At your service

    All critique is welcome. I also realize that face is a off, it is partly because erasing on my album paper may lead to holes :)

    Dec 14, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Detective Stetson and the Bayview Bomber

    I hope that you want my honest opinion and nothing else. The work so far is alright but there were a few things that deterred me from the story. First ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Danny

    Great work. I enjoyed this work. I do have a few small but broad critiques in regards to this work though. The first is, for some reason, the dialogue was ...

    Dec 13, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: A Sketch

    Thank you. Clearly I failed with the face :) I tried to draw the 3/4 and slightly upraised head and I probably messed up with lip positioning and jaw line. ...

    Dec 10, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: A Sketch

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Wake up Buttercup /page #5/

    Interesting work. Morning , it seems, already has covered the technical aspects of your piece so I guess I will try my best to critique a more subjective part of ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • General Articles Re: Science: A boon or a bane?

    Interesting article but it seems to concentrate on two different themes that of science and that of human morality. Since it is probably a thought provoking work I will not ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Rough Drawing

    Dec 8, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Lullaby

    Dear child, fall asleep As the twilight slowly dims. Into shadows world descends, Come ye hither to your bed. Hide behind your blanket well For the story I’m to tell ...

    Oct 22, 2011
  • General Articles Re: Fruitless Attempts With a Japanese Pen

    In all honestly it's absolutely alright. People have different ways of coping with what some call writer's block. I usually just take a break from writing and substitute it with ...

    Oct 12, 2011


"Be yourself" is not advice. It's an existential crisis waiting to happen.
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