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  • Randomosity
    Re: post your voice

    Hello YWSers!!!!! *high fives* Hope you are having a wonderful day and sitting comfortably in front of your screens with multiple chocolate bars and a box of ice cream stowed ...

    Jun 20, 2013


  • Hey guys and gals!!!! =D Was out in the rain but nothing could spoil the fun lololol So that's me with my youngest sister :3 She's adorable lololol

    Jun 2, 2013


  • 105 for me :)

    Aug 20, 2012

  • Romantic Short Stories
    Re: Just Friends

    Hello. This work sounds pretty interesting. There are a few things, though, that could be improved. For some reason the sentence about masks, at the end of paragraph 2, sounds ...

    Dec 14, 2011

  • Romantic Short Stories
    Re: Is It Worth The Pain

    Hello. It would be interesting to read chapter 1, this segment reads like a prologue and for the sake of this review I will treat it as such. It is ...

    Dec 14, 2011

  • Art & Photography
    Re: At your service

    All critique is welcome. I also realize that face is a off, it is partly because erasing on my album paper may lead to holes :)

    Dec 13, 2011

  • General Fiction Short Stories
    Re: Detective Stetson and the Bayview Bomber

    I hope that you want my honest opinion and nothing else. The work so far is alright but there were a few things that deterred me from the story. First ...

    Dec 13, 2011

  • General Fiction Short Stories
    Re: Danny

    Great work. I enjoyed this work. I do have a few small but broad critiques in regards to this work though. The first is, for some reason, the dialogue was ...

    Dec 13, 2011

  • Art & Photography
    Re: A Sketch

    Thank you. Clearly I failed with the face :) I tried to draw the 3/4 and slightly upraised head and I probably messed up with lip positioning and jaw line. ...

    Dec 10, 2011

  • Art & Photography
    Re: A Sketch

    Dec 9, 2011

  • Action/Adventure Short Stories
    Re: Wake up Buttercup /page #5/

    Interesting work. Morning , it seems, already has covered the technical aspects of your piece so I guess I will try my best to critique a more subjective part of ...

    Dec 9, 2011


  • Interesting article but it seems to concentrate on two different themes that of science and that of human morality. Since it is probably a thought provoking work I will not ...

    Dec 9, 2011

  • Art & Photography
    Re: Rough Drawing

    Dec 7, 2011

  • Lyric Poetry
    Re: Lullaby

    Dear child, fall asleep As the twilight slowly dims. Into shadows world descends, Come ye hither to your bed. Hide behind your blanket well For the story I’m to tell ...

    Oct 21, 2011


  • In all honestly it's absolutely alright. People have different ways of coping with what some call writer's block. I usually just take a break from writing and substitute it with ...

    Oct 12, 2011


Learn the rules like a pro, so you can break them like an artist.
— Pablo Picasso