Veritas

Not that you'll ever see this review, but I stumbled across it and thought it was worth reviewing anyway. I really like it. It was dark and beautiful and meaningful. ...

Well, I took the time to read it so might as well give it a go: To write good fantasy, detail is the key. The fatal flaw of most fantasy ...

OMG, that is adorable! *speechless*. That's just plain cute....

Very simple, very touching. I think that is the story of many peoples lives and you captured it on a whim. Great job!

A fairyland....climbing a tree.... Hmmm.... Okay, let's go what that one :P Well, I have to say that I'm impressed with how you handled that prompt. :P The best part ...

Reminds me of middle school!!!!! Lol acrostic is amazing! People look down on it because it's so simple but I like it! Sometimes short and simple is the best. YWS ...

Your main strength in this piece was the emotion you poured into it. I don't know if it's written off of personal experience but it doesn't even matter because you ...

I have to agree a lot with Tori. I can understand what you tried to do with repeating "I cried". Sometimes, if done right, the meaning will grow with every ...

I'm afraid I'm going to have to agree with Matthews. She hit it dead on. Your concept is cliche, but then again, most writing concepts are cliche. The trick is ...

The detail and feel of this poem is really impressive and I love it! I agree with tgirly about the third verse. Other than that I really have nothing to ...

This is very good! The simplicity makes it all the more powerful. Kudos!

Awww...I wish all sisters could be as close as this! Lovely poem, you capture the emotion well :)

Well...there's something about the randomness to this piece that makes it amazing! :D Honestly, some call it dumb, I call it incredible. Nonstop laughing all the way through. I really, ...

This is more like prose, i guess, so I don't know where to post :P Crossfire for Bhayden It’s strange to be caught in the middle of a war you ...

Wonderful poem with room for improvement :) I could feel the longing and the heartache in it which is good. It just felt a little fake to me. But hey, ...