Veritas

It's very cute and very simpleminded, just like a little girl holding a frog. It's nothing short of perfect for me. I love how you dropped capitalization as it added ...

Didn't really make much sense to me. I agree with the other two people above about how it went downhill. I really was interested for about the first three lines ...

This actually really great. It's imagery and simple descriptions are very fitting. However, I think you should refine it and cut off the rough edges. cut out all the things ...

It was interesting a kept me entertained to be sure. I'm not really qualified to critique it, though. I have a habit of writing fantasy but it also turns out ...

Hey that was really good! I agree with the person who said it was like linkin park. Awesome band. Very cool lyrics! I'd buy the song :) The only thing ...

This is very clever and very cute. I think we can all relate to this: Our little muses are like birds and the only way for them to be clear ...

Wow, this was very very good! Ehh...it's late at night, my mind is fried. Can't really say more than it's super good! The description was cool and kept me going ...

BOLD was written in response to a few comments I received on my poem Fireworks which I encourage you to read if you want to better understand this one. There's ...

"Young Cjscoot has turned the world of poetry upside down with a little piece of guenius she has called Sufocating. Become entranced as her words blend and flow as smoothly ...

I think I'll have a little fun writing this review. Let's try an offical review for the back of a book. *clears throat* "Young poet Artemis has brought an age-old ...

Ok, seriously, I was bored. Don’t judge too hard. Just some random thoughts. I am the creator, the page is my clay I will set my imagination free. The world ...

I absolutely love the fact that a lie is described as a beautiful ribbon. It's lacy and deceiving. Nothing but an adorned lie. I think it's brilliant. Your words are ...

This is very short, simple, and beautiful. Your mastery of language is very commendable and keeps the reader interested. The title is what pulled me in, I think. Everyone is ...

Hey JD! Welcome to YWS! I know you're going to love it here because your story is much like mine. I tried to write novels when I was younger too ...

Oh! Oh! I wrote something like this with the exact same title!!! I was a little suspicious upon opening it. XD You did a great job with this and i ...