Veritas

At long last, a brave soul to utter the name of God! I applaud you :D Now, to the review! My God, why have You forsaken me? Good first verse. ...

Hey there, squirt! This is a nice and simple poem. It's nice the way it is and still it could better. Poetry is about emotion (or lack of depending on ...

You've definitely earned a "like" for this one! This is very beautiful and i didn't find it as bad and repetitive as you said. This is amazing and even more ...

A series of haiku, I'd love to know what you think! Punctuation is a bit out of wack, I'm aware, feel free to correct me! And ask away is you ...

Great chapter! I thought it was funny that on the main page I saw "The Definition of Hell" next to a Spongebob avatar XD

First of all, let me say welcome to YWS! You're going to love it here and just by reading this poem I can tell that you're going to be a ...

I'm actually very impressed with this. I had to get up and drink some lemonade because you made me so thirsty! This is so very realistic and it reminded me ...

I agree with Nafe on most of her points. This poem either needs to be heartfelt or funny and entertaining. You fell into a grey area. I wasn't sure if ...

Hmmm...this is very good and made me think. We humans are so....cocky. we think that we're have such control over everything like its our decision that matter. Yeah, right. One ...

Isn't it strange how the compliments of a complete stranger can mean more than a compliment from a friend? However weird it is, it's true. Strangers like the people here ...

Morbidly beautiful, beautifully morbid...I really can't decide but i know it was great! Had tears in my eyes by the end. The whole broken-hearted thing is so cliche and I ...

Wow, that got better and better as I went along. So let me get this straight: humans hate elves, humans are killing elves, humans are going to march to some ...

Hey there! I think you did a really good job with this. The description was topnotch. I wrote a poem about the moon (random one night could see it from ...

The poem is a simple as the content suggests and I applaud you for that! I once read a poem called Simple that was at least three pages long...yeah, that ...

This is brilliant and completely true. This are the characteristics of a cowards and put so elegantly on paper! It's pure genius. Nice format, nice wording, great overall! Veritas