Veritas

Hey there! Here's a poem I wrote after reading some of my favorite fantasy books. Yes, it's very juvenile, but it was written to reflect the childish nature that finds ...

Excellent work! Everything looks proportionate which is an amazing accomplishment in itself! I agree with Ty: it could use a little shading. But other than that...Bravo!

OOOO...the french is what made this poem for me. You're extremely descriptive and this was truly a pleasant read. It sounds like you had a wonderful time :) keep writing, ...

This poem is great Short and sweet and to the point Haiku's are the bomb!

Beautiful poem! The rhyme scheme was very well done and flowed excellently. It's the last few lines that I tripped on a bit: "If we can make the world, A ...

You have a great basic idea for this piece and it has a great potential, however I think you could have made it more powerful. Some writers have to sacrifice ...

So short and yet so very effective and powerful. I call that a successful poem. I loved "They promised you the world/They gave you a corner". Very, very, powerful. Loved ...

Great poem ad good content. I can perceive the feeling you're trying to give off. I think the flow needs a little work, though. I agree with what Deanie said ...

Wow....that should be in a book somewhere!! I can't find anything to nitpick! Very intense despite it's length. It really does make you think about how worthless a kiss has ...

I completely understand, girl. My family comes to blows sometimes and it's hard to be caught in the middle. I wrote a poem about it called Crossfire (guess the title ...

Oh, writer's block....the pen's arch nemesis... I think we can all relate to this one. I commend you putting the pent-up frustration of all writers on earth in one poem ...

That was the best laugh I've had all day! Haha, yeah I wish I was that much of a genius! Lol thanks so much for the welcome, it's super appreciated!

Ummmm....wow? Lol I clicked on the link and didn't expect to see such incredible drawing!! You're really talented, you know that? Your lines are very clear and precise and fantastic!! ...

The content of this poem is very beautiful a it was a pleasant read. I think you could change the format up a bit though. Some verses are super long, ...

Don’t cry for me Because I never want to see another tear Don’t ask me about what happened: No one will ever know. None but me. I’ll remain trapped in ...