Veritas
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I know it's more prose than poetry but I didn't think it fit into the short-story category. This is a very short piece about abuse. If you like it, there's ...
Dec 13, 2011
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Rated 16+ because i not sure you'll get it otherwise. But hey, there are some pretty mature people under 16. Read at your own discretion than. It's not to bad ...
Nov 8, 2011
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7/10 mysterious...
Oct 9, 2011
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I'm afraid to wake. While my nightmares are fleeting, Reality lasts.
Oct 9, 2011
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I am tired of ignorance. They were smouldering ruins: both the towers and the lives. The people, mutilated, unrecognizable. Did the angels catch them when they jumped and bear them ...
Sep 10, 2011
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Speechless. I have nothing to saw but you just changed my life.
Aug 27, 2011
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That one gave me chills. That was terribly well written. So well that I almost wish I hadn't read it. You're very talented at writing this dark kind of thing. ...
Aug 26, 2011
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Hey, welcome to YWS! You're going to love it here if you love to write! I like the poem you've got here and I agree completely. One thing though, you ...
Aug 26, 2011
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I realize that there can be many interpretations of this piece so please tell me what you think! I'll put my intended interpretation in a spoiler so you can read ...
Aug 26, 2011
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This fell a bit short of my expectations after reading Ace of Thieves but it was still good in its own way. From the words of a monster i caps ...
Jul 20, 2011
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This actually a very impressive piece your metaphors are top notch and consistent which is excellent. Choosing to continue the metaphor all the way through definitely added to the brilliant ...
Jul 19, 2011
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For some reason this felt like a rap to me. Not that that's a bad thing at all. I tried it. It failed. I can't rap for my life :P ...
Jul 11, 2011
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Well you definitely kept me going! This was one of those poems when i felt like the sound around me was muffled and the only thing that existed was me ...
Jul 11, 2011
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This is very good! The emotion here is raw, undefined, and powerful and that's a great style of writing. My friend seems to be going through the same thing. Self-pity ...
Jul 11, 2011
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....That' the best piece of poetry I've seen in a very, and I mean a very long time. Wow, I can't even breath lliterally! This needs to be somewhere, in ...
Jul 11, 2011