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Verbena

  • Narrative Poetry Re: Bleached

    A poem is a collective mass of many fine threads darting in at all angles and joining together. This is the background, if you will. A variety of components that ...

    May 29, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Got thicket juice in my pocket.

    I am disgusted with myself. ---- God, have you seen— I hated over a one thousand time distance looking like a sunken cake or sunken eyes, half cooked and I ...

    Mar 10, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Son of the moon

    That red sky tonight, means the moon is on fire your black tongue, hints you’re a big, fat liar. That pale skin of yours, as solid as stones it’s a ...

    Mar 7, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Yes, hello.

    Thank you for the advice. However, I think I can manage on my own. See you around.

    Mar 6, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Yes, hello.

    Review is done. Review. Prefer it to critique since my critiques seem to be an evaluation of my overall thought, so...review it is. Yes, it's odd being...welcomed, no strings attached. ...

    Mar 5, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Slave Speaks

    A slave speaking. Until now I hadn't yet come across a poem that revolved around a topic as such. You're skilled at encapsulating fascination without making your words so foreign ...

    Mar 5, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Yes, hello.

    Thank you very much for the welcomes.

    Mar 3, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Yes, hello.

    Became active today. Joined a while ago at the advice of someone I knew off of a different writing forum. I believe's he's Galerius over here. I like to read ...

    Feb 28, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: We all knew it

    You convey your message fine. The flaw is in how you execute your message. Seems like this is the type of poem you'd keep to yourself in the quiet and ...

    Feb 28, 2011


Irrigation of the land with seawater desalinated by fusion power is ancient. It's called 'rain'.
— Michael McClary