VeraWinters

Love this. I can definitely see why you do. You inject so much emotion into your writing, It is a really important skill to have. The writing is very graphic, ...

I fully believe they should allow gay marriage, Everyone has the write to be with the person they love. It is a horrible prejudice, on a par with hating people ...

This is really good. You capture that uncertain feeling you often get in a relationship perfectly. There are lots of mixed emotions, love ,loss etc A lot of people that ...

This is very smart you have a great use of adjectives you use adjectives isn a really unique which many writers wok for. it is dark in parts it also ...

Trying to make fan fiction your own is hard , but you pull it off. Not much is explained in this chapter, try and put some more in your next ...

Poetry is hard enougth, but making everything ryme and also sound great is very hard to do. But you can improve on some things. Add some more dementions to it ...

The world is an oyster I am the pearl A naive pearl A perky pearl I can get my way or go with the flow I will bend or swoop ...

Sounds like a horrible experiance, glad you got out of it. This could have easily been described very cliched like, but this feels fresh and unique. there are a couple ...

My name is Violet, I am a flyer of the seasons In fall I am a artist with lemon in my hair and sapphire between my toes In Winter I ...

This is great, I love stories like this, that show a not so noble act through the eyes of the person commiting it. There is a underlyning innocence in the ...

This is definitely a very different kind of work, I think a lot of people, especially on this site can relate to this. making the writers block and the muse ...

The title origianaly turned me off this, becauce it sounded very one note and flat. But when I read it I found that It has a lot of personality, and ...

I have not read many personal articles on Michael Jackson's death- and none written in a young persons point of view. He oviosly ment a lot to you as he ...

I really enjoyed this. the story i believe is about a girl doing something she will later very much regret, but also about her losing her innocence. the story has ...

"You will run through a patch of wild flowers, screaming" She told me this in whispers that with the cool, making my ears tingle in her icy melody. Who was ...