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Hello Kyollorc This is an interesting poem. It's very well written and I love your use of language. Using the commas on the first line of every stanza really separates ...

I am a Butterfly on a highway. My wings broken and bruised The cars drive by Oblivious To my sickness. I stumble forward My legs trying to Hold my once ...

This is very good. The figures in this picture are very whimsical looking. There look fairy tale like. The little girl and the ugly hag are a figure I have ...

Hi loller65. This is a good poem. As you said it is unique and oddball and I am impressed that you can write something like this in 5 minutes.There is ...

10/10 slightly addictive

Banned for being nosy about people you don't know.

Hello originalhobbit I like your piece. It's rather interesting portrait. I would like to point out that to m it's only a image, not a story, and although I can ...

Make it a big one rhett gone with the wind

This is a very good piece. The whole teenage angst, no one understands me especially my parent feel can easily come off whiny and annoying but this is pitch perfect. ...

Finns phone always seems to ring louder than usual hen it rang at an incontinent time. She was finally getting into a rhythm with her editing, noticing more errors more ...

I really like this poem. It's dark glommy tragic deppsing to an extent and somewhat heavy. The story Is one ive heard a lot, the tragic story of a misguied ...

Hi I really like this poem. Even though it's very you've made a very clear, crisp picture in my mind. it's almost like a scene in a film. I would ...

First Id like to say that there are a lot of pieces out there like this. Sort of "poor little rich girl" pieces that try and make the reader feel ...

Hi there. I would firstly like to say that you could probably related to every teenage girl (Including me) in the world with this feeling that the world is ending ...

Granted but you are also incredibly shallow and self centered which makes it immposible for you to get a job so you are thrown onto the streets and eventully die ...