VeraWinters

wow. This is a powerful story, the first hand perspective really gives intensity to it. It makes me scared to go through parks at night. I like the fact that ...

I really like this. The good:\ You use you're words sparingly , like every one was chosen special, it makes the work feel sacred and special. A lot of the ...

Name: vesper Age: 18 Gender: Female Appearance: Power: Extreme Charisma, is loved by all. However she does not always deserve it Personality: Dry sense of humor, very sarcastic, has a ...

I like this, but it leaves a lot of unanswered Questions You talk a lot about march. and how bad march is but what happened in march, that bothered me ...

This storybook is about a German Teacher, Mr Wrine, and the many students he come in contact with. He works at a large bohemian school called Quentin that is occupied ...

I really like this. Children always depend on the parents so much, but sometimes parents don't return the favor. It's good to see someone use this idea in a poem. ...

Very good, It's interesting, but it does feel like a first attempt. Try and go over it agaun and try to make it more polished. The idea feels kind of ...

love this, I was waiting for someone to tell a story through anger against fairy tales. Well Done There are lots of very inspiring and interesting lines but my favourite ...

Trying to address the issues of the blind spots in society is hard to tackle, and you pulled it off. The piece is very honest but not brutally so, and ...

Boxes hide what they want to show Like jealous little children Crying for attention Salty tears of longing Claustrophobic nightmare Outside is an airy dream Clinging to scratching walls Spiraling ...

I simply wanted to put my writing up and have people review and help me improve. I also wanted to be part of a site where younger people had a ...

I love No Country for old men. Although I thought It was the scariest movie I have seen in a very long time. I can see why it won all ...

Oh, very graphic, very amazing. There is a lot of anger and strength in this piece, the event is captured very well There are a couple of things that could ...

Very well put together. Not many people can pull off doing work this short. You have a very strong sense of language One of the advantages of having a short ...

Laughing to you Ls like crying to others Like pulling out my hair at the roots Why would I stay? When I'm always Stepping on broken promises You hold me ...