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I would just like to raise another point about racism. Racism is still a huge part of our society, but no one ever wants to admit to it. I'll give ...

HI there Skins. I like this, it's a fun and amusing piece, I think it would appeal to younger audiences. There are a few things I think you could improve ...

Hi GildedLily I'm not really sure about this piece. I would like to congratulate you on the originality and interesting structure of this piece. This is rather uplifting piece, my ...

Asher was never meant to be a teacher He was far to open and to kind. He cared to much about his students Shallow teenagers trying to waste their lives. ...

Hi, dreamy155 I like this, it is a very easy, accessible song lyrics, I can almost imagine A tune to them. I like that the lines themselves are very short, ...

Hi nova I liked this poem. It had a good story and image to it. There is a little room for improvement though, This is just a little block I ...

I decorated the window With shooting stars. I covered it with glitter To make the time pass. I wrote some song lyrics And stuck that on too. I looked out ...

Hi kat jackson This was good. I agree with Kaedee when she says her eyes were pulled in all different directions. There is a lot to look at in this ...

Hi Golden Quill Hmm... not quite sure what I think of this. I agree with Snoink when she says there is a lot of imagery and not much else. Although ...

Hi Genshawklan. I like this poem. I like the way you structured it so it looks like a tree (Very clever) I also very much like the poem itself. Your ...

“Next Wednesday I’ll get it sorted out, promise” I was lying through my teeth. I hated lying to my brother but what choice did I have? Come clean? Tell him ...

Hi kingolions Nice poem. I'd like to congratulate you on your flow. It's very good and solid and one of the strengths in this poem. The mood of this poem ...

Hi ArahinaSiddel This is a very good poem. You have a lot of skill in describing a scene and making a perfect picture in people's heads. This image on what ...

This is very good. The flowers are very drawn. Your a very talented sketcher and at showing the light and shade in the flowers, which is difficult to do. The ...

Hi dogs Hmm, I'm not sure what I think of this. In parts these lyrics veer off into being very ordinary love song like, but your use of metaphors and ...