Ventomology

Oh... Well I probably should have studied more on the meteor bit... (I tried asking an astrophysicist but...) Anyway, thanks for reading my article! I sort of thought of it ...

Oh um... That bit about the bleeding is explained earlier in the story... Thanks for reviewing though!

Thank you so much! I'll definitely take this speech differentiation thing to a higher level on my next piece. Of course, having characters of different social standings probably helps... Thanks ...

Ooh! Thanks for starting this one! Please do not be afraid to point out any little details you find awkward later (I'm sure there are many.) Thanks again!

Oh, well... Let's see, how do I explain this? So you know how old people talk a little differently than teenagers and twenty-somethings? They use different words, expressions, phrases, and ...

Thanks for reading this! I was worried no one would find it.

Well, I think I mentioned this in the earlier chapters, but they're all socially awkward freshmen in high school. I suppose it's easy to lose track of their ages, isn't ...

Ah, I guess that shadow part is confusing. I'll fix it so that it makes more sense for later readers. Thanks so much for always reviewing me!

Oh, I see those bits there. Thanks for catching them for me!

Well, there'll only be one or two more chapters. I'm having troubles tying everything back together, so it could be a while. But I promise I'll finish! Thanks for reading!

Since there will only be one or two more chapters, I've been re-writing it over and over again to make sure it's epic AND ties up all the loose ends. ...

I hate to admit, but the appearance bit is going to be a joke. I suppose I should have her get flustered? And I'm not sure if I mentioned, but ...

Hey thanks for reading this! And you're right about the length of the dialogue sentences. I'll watch for that while I'm editing the final chapters.

Thanks so much for reviewing me all the time! (Sometimes I can't believe the mistakes I make, so I'm glad I have someone who notices them!) I'll go back in ...

Oh crap... I forgot to edit Carrie's part after re-writing the torture scene! Oh my gosh thank you so much for finding that! (I feel like I'm losing my touch ...