Ventomology

Well, I think I mentioned this in the earlier chapters, but they're all socially awkward freshmen in high school. I suppose it's easy to lose track of their ages, isn't ...

Ah, I guess that shadow part is confusing. I'll fix it so that it makes more sense for later readers. Thanks so much for always reviewing me!

Oh, I see those bits there. Thanks for catching them for me!

Well, there'll only be one or two more chapters. I'm having troubles tying everything back together, so it could be a while. But I promise I'll finish! Thanks for reading!

Since there will only be one or two more chapters, I've been re-writing it over and over again to make sure it's epic AND ties up all the loose ends. ...

I hate to admit, but the appearance bit is going to be a joke. I suppose I should have her get flustered? And I'm not sure if I mentioned, but ...

Hey thanks for reading this! And you're right about the length of the dialogue sentences. I'll watch for that while I'm editing the final chapters.

Thanks so much for reviewing me all the time! (Sometimes I can't believe the mistakes I make, so I'm glad I have someone who notices them!) I'll go back in ...

Oh crap... I forgot to edit Carrie's part after re-writing the torture scene! Oh my gosh thank you so much for finding that! (I feel like I'm losing my touch ...

Well, since you're offering, I'll be posting 'pilot' chapters of some possible projects soon. It would be nice to have those reviewed (not just on writing and style, but on ...

Oh, yeah... I didn't do so much characterization in the first few chapters... I'll make a note of that and introduce better characters next time I start a new piece. ...

Thanks a bunch!

Well, in response to the first question, they do still feel pain... (I hope I did an okay job with that?) And you're right, the fight scene should include some ...

Thank you for reviewing! (And yeah, I probably shouldn't assume that everyone reads scientific journals...)

It's nice to see you again! Thanks for reviewing, and you are so right! I guess when I review other people I should think about it and see what techniques ...