Ventomology

Oh no, not building up on Kalan's injuries! I meant like... more suspense and worry over what happened to Kalan. Geez, I'm just sputtering nonsense today.

I know Kalan's injuries must be bad, but the build-up was what I was focusing on. (Maybe I should work on my ability to communicate ideas better...) Sorry if I ...

Yo! I know I didn't review the last two chapters... sorry about that. But they were all so good! Anyway, I only have one comment for you today, and that ...

Oh... you can tell me any way you want. I think most people usually post it on my wall though.

Wow... did I forget to mark this as a review? Oh well.

How do I review fast? I don't get it. I just read it as soon as Mess posted it.

Oh whoops! I can't believe I left in a typo! *cries* Anyways, thanks a bunch for catching that! I'll fix it ASAP.

Thanks, dude!

I was going to actually review you this week, but I don't have much to say! It's really good! The verbs you used were generally very strong, and the action ...

Yo! Sorry I couldn't review this week. Uh, I'm just going to leave a comment 'cause I have like... three things maybe? One: Is all of that passive voice on ...

He only pretends he's not. In one of the earlier chapters, Braxton tries to save his older brother from an enchanted inn. He kind of fails. Also... it's in the ...

I shall fix those bits right away. Since this is for Tenyo's contest, I'll actually have a chapter up every week, so that will hopefully make you happy. Thanks again!

(laughs evilly) You shall see the colors come into play later. And wow, I don't know how to thank you! I've met very few people who can read through all ...

Thanks, Losty! And by the way, Braxton is the second prince.

Thanks! And... as for the title, it is what it is because the story is loosely based on the fairy tale "The Golden Bird". I wonder what a better name ...