Ventomology

You're precisely right!

My one and only comment today is to not always start a paragraph of dialogue with quotation marks. It's mostly an aesthetics thing, and makes the work look better, as ...

ACK! A typo! I shall fix that right away. As for the second note, that was explained in an earlier chapter. Thanks for the review! I'm really glad someone's reading ...

Hiya! I only have one little comment for you today, so no actual reviewing. Anyways, I believe that in the second scene, while you had good action, you might want ...

Nope, not really.

Yeah. Precisely.

Oh no, not building up on Kalan's injuries! I meant like... more suspense and worry over what happened to Kalan. Geez, I'm just sputtering nonsense today.

I know Kalan's injuries must be bad, but the build-up was what I was focusing on. (Maybe I should work on my ability to communicate ideas better...) Sorry if I ...

Yo! I know I didn't review the last two chapters... sorry about that. But they were all so good! Anyway, I only have one comment for you today, and that ...

Oh... you can tell me any way you want. I think most people usually post it on my wall though.

Wow... did I forget to mark this as a review? Oh well.

How do I review fast? I don't get it. I just read it as soon as Mess posted it.

Oh whoops! I can't believe I left in a typo! *cries* Anyways, thanks a bunch for catching that! I'll fix it ASAP.

Thanks, dude!

I was going to actually review you this week, but I don't have much to say! It's really good! The verbs you used were generally very strong, and the action ...