Ventomology

We will discuss the sirens and their habits of attraction, yes. (Also I can't believe you remember that he has two moms. I thought it was subtle enough to be ...

Oh wow Rydia's prank is totally messing with me. Yeah, in retrospect, I probably should have written more conversation about whether or not to ask, rather than how to ask. ...

The reason the last line sucks is because this chapter should be like a grueling 500-1000 words longer, but it was 10 pm Sunday night and I needed to end ...

Does emotional writing ruin my ability to spellcheck... I'd better fix those little errors before BlueAfrica reviews, so thanks for catching them! Ugh I love your ability to empathize with ...

You didn't tell me in the chat that you reviewed! Nonetheless, thanks so much. There are more feels next week, so maybe put that one off until you're all done ...

My roommate said I looked really pained while writing this, and guess what there's more feels next week.

Man, I always feel silly when people point out my grammatical errors. I'll fix that once I'm at the computer. But I'm glad you liked this chapter!

Haha, this is actually sci-fi, if you check the tags at the top. But I'm glad you like it! Admittedly, I don't often have a chance to completely check through ...

Ah, it's nice to get new eyes on this. I hadn't realized I was getting lazy with the dialogue. Thanks so much!

No worries! Being sick isn't very fun. And I really want to respond to your comments, but no spoilers. Sorry! Thanks so much!

Haha the crew that Focci mentioned is in fact, Tejal's adoptive parents. I should probably clear that up when they show up again. Thanks as always! I think things will ...

I feel like Ellipse probably tends to switch languages when she's talking to the boys. That should be something for me to clarify in all the chapters, not just this ...

Honestly, it might be a mixture of both on why this particular future chapter is clearer. The others delved less into the action and dialogue, and before this part, I ...

Ah, so it's like eating dessert first. That's a fun way to start the whole novel!

Tbh I came up with the name 'tubai' because I had been reading my urban geography textbook in advance this summer, and Dubai was mentioned several times in it. Thanks ...