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Re: Muster Heroes – QuickSave 12
Heya! It's a fabulous day for catching up no? Let's see what I can tack on to Ender's lovely review. In Response to Ender: While I probably have explained the ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 19): Tree Climbing 010
Ha ha! I will catch up with a vengeance! Now let's get this review rolling, shall we? General Comments: In addition to Miss Hart's comment on varying sentence length, I ...
Dec 20, 2015 -
Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter Seven, Part Three - Not so Great Expectations
They are probably in hot water, but not 'they all three of them.' Also, I am now caught up! I think all that baking helped with my motivation. Now, moving ...
Dec 13, 2015 -
Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter Seven, Part Two - Not so Great Expectations
Um, harsh? I am starting to not like Mrs Williams. Maybe instead of sending him home, someone could find a way to prevent him from falling asleep in class. Anyways, ...
Dec 13, 2015 -
Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter Six, Part Five - Midweek Action
Finally... I made it... after baking cookies for five hours. I suppose I should get on with the review so I can catch up, no? General Comments: Adverbs , Hunter. ...
Dec 13, 2015 -
Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 18): Paranoia and Boredom Mix Surprisingly Well
I have home internet again, so here I am, ready to (mostly) catch up! Let's get on with the show, shall we? General Comments: 1. I don't like picking on ...
Dec 13, 2015 -
Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 17): Privacy, I See
HA! MIKHAIL HAS SECRETS I KNEW IT! Anyways... on with the review? General Comments: I probably have said the following in the past, but I was searching for something constructive ...
Nov 30, 2015 -
Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 16): Exploring Equals Fun
Whoo, I made it! Sorry this took me like forever. General Comments: Hmm... somehow, there just seemed to be several places where I sensed a disjoint between action and reaction, ...
Nov 30, 2015 -
Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter Seven, Part One - Not so Great Expectations
I'm caught up! Hopefully I'll stay that way too, since I have actual free time now. General Comments: I love the dialogue in this story. It's so weird, but so ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter Six, Part Eight - Midweek Action
It's been what, three weeks since I read the last chapter? This is not good planning on my part. Anyways, going on: General Comments: If you're going to add in ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: The Broken Heart of the Mad King (His Swan Song)
Hey, Silver! I am here as promised! I figured I would steal this piece before the crazy review day people start up. You probably haven't gotten many reviews from me ...
Nov 28, 2015 -
Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 15): Hide-and-Hide
I am giddy from the two-hour delay and measly inch of snow we got at home, so I am here early! Hoorah! Anyways, let's see what I've got. General Comments: ...
Nov 24, 2015 -
Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 14): Winning Without a Spin
Okie dokie... General Comments: 1. To be completely honest, I think whatever you'd been doing earlier with your writing felt more alive. Adding in details where you didn't leave space ...
Nov 11, 2015 -
Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter Six, Part Seven - Midweek Action
Um... weird methods much, Mr. Van der Brunnen? Anyways, let's get on with this review. General Comments: 1. Little note on the hyphenating of long numbers: to avoid overwhelming your ...
Nov 11, 2015 -
Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter Six, Part Six - Midweek Action
Ah, we finally get a glimpse of the move tiers... Minerva's got a nice set of options to pick from. General Comments: 1. As much as I appreciate the more ...
Nov 11, 2015