Ventomology

Okay but.... shouldn't we take this as indication that they will die of old age? Or do like a bunch of people just have "old age" on their backs. Anywho, ...

Hello hello! I'm sorry I haven't read the previous chapters of this work, but it's at the bottom of the Green Room and deserves some love, so let's get right ...

Hello! Sorry for the long wait. I kept meaning to leave a review, but every time I read through this, I never seem to have anything to add! So I ...

Hi! It's been a while since I reviewed a short story, but hopefully I can offer at least a little bit of advice. Also were you inspired by Black Mirror ...

Hi!! I keep seeing your name on the review leaderboards, but I didn't realize you had works in the GR! So, not really part of the review, but just a ...

Wow. You did it! You finished! Congratulations!!! Getting through a whole novel and doing lms are no easy feat, and here you are! Awesome job! Chapter-Specific Notes: 1. I generally ...

Here I am, back again! FYI, I read ahead through chapter 42 in order to help me gather my thoughts on this chapter, and so that I can offer feedback ...

Hey. Hey can you stop with the cliff hangers for like two seconds. I feel like I'm about to have a heart attack every time I finish a chapter I ...

Hey I'm back! Let's dive right in: 1. Basically the first half of this chapter is just us being told about the household. There isn't really any action in it, ...

Hey! I'm back, as promised. Let's get this show on the road. 1. Nice opening line! I love me some personification and imagery. Plus they're establishing the location nicely. 2. ...

Hi hello let's dive right back in! 1. LanaOverland has already pointed out how some of the phrasing is a little odd. I know you're not a native English speaker, ...

Hello hello I'm back! Your work is yet again the oldest in the Green Room. It's a shame this hasn't been getting more love though. It's a fun read! 1. ...

And I am caught up yet again. Let's do this. 1. So I know I have complimented the way magic is incorporated into the world and plot of this story. ...

Hey! This is currently the oldest piece in the GR, so I thought I'd drop by. It looks like other chapters are also still in the GR, so chances are ...

Hello hello. I am so exhausted that I didn't even want to sit up at my computer so I'm writing this on my phone. Please forgive me for any unusual ...