-
Re: The Long Drive
Free Poem 1: things I know how to say I can't say much. My mom taught me enough so that I can say I can say a little Chinese. Ran ...
Apr 4, 2024 -
Re: fleeting summer daydream
The visual structure of "Sounds from the Walls" is so strong, and I love how it plays into the idea of being trapped or cornered!
Apr 4, 2024 -
Re: The Long Drive
Free song verse take one: See the apple orchard from the highway fruit so red and ripe it must be gourmet Bite in through the skin and feel the juice ...
Apr 4, 2024 -
Re: The Long Drive
Wednesday Haiku 1: 04/03 What April showers? Snowflakes fly flat as the plains and bring May flooding.
Apr 3, 2024 -
Re: Sunbathing in a parking lot
Idk if you meant to do this or not... but there are so many 's' sounds in this poem and it really makes the whole thing sound very cohesive out ...
Apr 3, 2024 -
Re: The Long Drive
Intro + Outro Lyrics: The wind brushes my skin, and the fir trees sway. I drive along I-5 by the light of day. --- A lot happens musically --- The ...
Apr 3, 2024 -
Re: carnival funhouse mirror
Love the ending on this one! A good turn of phrase is always fun.
Apr 3, 2024 -
Re: of dusk and dragonflies
It's always such a treat to see nature and seasons-themed haikus. It's really in that haiku spirit. And I love the personification and the action verbs in yours!
Apr 3, 2024 -
Re: Origami Hearts Shaped like Poetry
Ahhh! It's always so fun to see poetry in the format of things we wouldn't usually see as poetic. Love the recipe for disaster.
Apr 3, 2024 -
Re: The Long Drive
Chao Mien Western Update #1 No Ordinary Town Out West (includes snippets from Something Wrong, Seek Your Fortune) “Western whistle” into a “trotting” banjo riff COWBOY 1: THIS IS NO ...
Apr 2, 2024 -
Re: The Long Drive
Free Song Groove: edit: lol was looking at this and realized those sixteenth rests in the treble clef should be eights. haha whoops.
Apr 2, 2024 -
Re: The Long Drive
Warm-up Five | Goals you Can't Complete Enspoilered for like... the barest of forbidden grape juice content. Pile it all in the instant pot, the carrots, the onions, the beef. ...
Mar 31, 2024 -
Re: The Long Drive
Some NaPo InSpo (lol did you see what I did there) "Workin' Hard" by Fujii Kaze "Early Autumn" sung by Ella Fitzgerald "Too Sweet" by Hozier The Hudson River School ...
Mar 28, 2024 -
Re: The Long Drive
Ahhhh thank you Mint!!! Honestly I just want to be silly haha. I'm glad people enjoy it.
Mar 27, 2024 -
Re: The Long Drive
Warm-up Four | Package at Work New work computer Please work, computer Clean QWERTY keyboard working perfectly computer Reinstalling programs Please don't stall, my programs The brand-new CPU should h
Mar 27, 2024