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Re: The Long Drive
Sunday Sonnet 2: 04/14 The rolling glacial foothills on repeat are brown and beige and boring-er than corn. No crops, nor cows, nor combines do adorn the hilltops, which then ...
Apr 15, 2024 -
Re: The Long Drive
Wednesday Haiku 04/10 Persevere, dear moon and devour the brilliant sun to steal his spotlight
Apr 11, 2024 -
Re: The Long Drive
Eclipse Poem Take 1: Cosmic coincidence tied my mother and father. They met at a party where she translated jokes for him, and he took her to lunch again, and ...
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Re: The Long Drive
Sunday Sonnet 1: 04/07 What say we on the seven hour drive? What probing questions probe the right amount? What game of leading prompts must I contrive for you a ...
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Re: carnival funhouse mirror
Okay but actually I feel like this song explains so much about your poetry? Like the way things flow together and how the ideas move and overlap.
Apr 6, 2024 -
Re: The Long Drive
@alliyah Chinese poetry actually has a very long history of being a visual art! It was combined with calligraphy for so long that they are in some ways hard to ...
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Re: The Long Drive
Free Song: Home Again Lyrics The wind kisses my skin, and the fir trees sway. I drive along I-5 by the light of day. See the apple orchard from the ...
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Re: on code and conlangs
Your rondeau is lovely! Time is an excellent subject for this form, since the rhyme scheme is so repetitive, and I think the -our sounds give it a very round ...
Apr 4, 2024 -
Re: The Long Drive
Free Poem 1: things I know how to say I can't say much. My mom taught me enough so that I can say I can say a little Chinese. Ran ...
Apr 4, 2024 -
Re: fleeting summer daydream
The visual structure of "Sounds from the Walls" is so strong, and I love how it plays into the idea of being trapped or cornered!
Apr 4, 2024 -
Re: The Long Drive
Free song verse take one: See the apple orchard from the highway fruit so red and ripe it must be gourmet Bite in through the skin and feel the juice ...
Apr 4, 2024 -
Re: The Long Drive
Wednesday Haiku 1: 04/03 What April showers? Snowflakes fly flat as the plains and bring May flooding.
Apr 3, 2024 -
Re: Sunbathing in a parking lot
Idk if you meant to do this or not... but there are so many 's' sounds in this poem and it really makes the whole thing sound very cohesive out ...
Apr 3, 2024 -
Re: The Long Drive
Intro + Outro Lyrics: The wind brushes my skin, and the fir trees sway. I drive along I-5 by the light of day. --- A lot happens musically --- The ...
Apr 3, 2024 -
Re: carnival funhouse mirror
Love the ending on this one! A good turn of phrase is always fun.
Apr 3, 2024