Venom

There isn't a word great enough to describe your writing, Ashleylee. When I read it, I didn't see any things that needed to be fixed. But, that is a given ...

6/10

Banned for using a common chatspeak term.

6/10

Banned for falsely accusing me of wanting to kill you.

Banned for having a cat in your avatar.

7/10

But before I tell you this story maybe I should tell you who I am. There should be a comma after story . At least on the outside. I think ...

Banned for not loving my avatar.

I have AIM as well. Though, I don't have it displayed on here.

Banned for having an awesome avatar.

Ha. I had like 3 Tamagotchis when I was in the 5th grade. I used to always take them to school and my friends would bring theirs. During class, we ...

Nice. 7/10

They came out just as they’d gone in, save his jacket around her thin beautiful shoulders. There should be a comma after thin . I mean I’d have to be ...

It was Christmastime in 1998 for the two-legged animals that lived across the barren fields in the small structures they called houses. There should be a space between Christmas and ...