Venom

8/10 'Cause you have Skillet on there. 1. Numb - Linkin Park 2. Boys Pop Bottles, Girls Pop Their Asses - Dot Dot Curve :) 3. All These Things That ...

2/10 It looks cool, but I can't read it 'cause I don't speak whatever language it is in.

Banned for not using capitalization.

Sweetness. I loved it. I'm so happy you posted this chapter so quickly. I didn't see anything that needed to be fixed. Like always. As I said on Chapter 16, ...

Ann needs to be slapped in the face. I hate her so much. I have never hated a character in a story as much as I hate Ann right now. ...

I pursed my lips, slamming my locker shut and turning to face her. This sentence sounds really weird to me. I feel like you changed tense. No other else will ...

I am in love. Your writing, especially with By Sun, By Moon, leaves me speechless. I am also very touched that you posted this for me, I was waiting ever ...

Here we go: Grumbling, I lifted my hood to cover my hair and shoved my hands up into my sleeves of my sweatshirts. I believe it should be the instead ...

Perfection. Flawless. Well-written. Attention grabbing. Those are only a few words to describe your writing. Your writing is truly the best I have ever read on YWS. I would not ...

Uhm..I really don't know what to say about this. I don't know if that's a good thing or a bad thing. But, anyways, I spotted a few things that sounded ...

Aw! You posted this just for me. How sweet. Anyway, another excellent chapter. I didn't find anything wrong per say, but I did find two things that I wasn't very ...

Wow, KJ, just wow. Your writing belongs on the shelves of bookstores around the world. I enjoy your writing more than Stephenie Meyer's writing. As always, I was not able ...

Again...8/10.

9/10. Love that song.

Yeah, puppies are amazing. The person below me owns a cellphone.