VengefulReaper

Thank you so much for the review! I rewrote this chapter a lot because it's the first time I introduce some of the main themes of the story (one of ...

Thank you so much for the review. I plan to have the rich and the poor be key parts of my story. The thing I was going for in this ...

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Hey, I'm just here to leave some quick thoughts. So, I am officially 10 days late to this chapter (Vac work can be a pain) so I kinda had to ...

Oh, by the way, a new chapter is up. Not the prologue, I am not writing currently, just uploading what I have. Vac Work can be a pain...

I'll give it a shot. thanks

Thanks, I'll have a look at it again. I was thinking about doing a small prologue for the start of the war. Though the war itself isn't particularly relevant to ...

Thanks, I'll be looking out for it. Your descriptive writing is really good. I could use some advice from you on my work since I'm new to writing (if you ...

Thanks for the feedback and the review! I'll definitely have a look at those repetitions and edit them. Thanks!

Thanks for the feedback. I think I will scrap the whole exposition stuff in the beginning and just open with the dialogue.