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Re: The Lie that Saved the World Chapter 5: Induction part 2
Thank you so much for the review!! I really appreciate the thoughts you have on each of my chapters. You pick up on a lot of things that I, sometimes, ...
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Re: Iceflame// Chapter 12: Meet the Elite
Hey, just here to leave a quick review! This was a good aftermath chapter here. One thing you have done really well is giving us an explanation of the absence ...
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Re: The Lie that Saved the World Chapter 4: Induction
Thanks so much for the review! Good to be back. I'll definitely add to Sarah's conversation with Ethan. Please bear with me while I make my way through your chapters ...
May 15, 2022 -
Re: The Lie that Saved the World Chapter 3
Thanks so much for the review! I am thinking about reworking my first chapter to be the aftermath of the bioweapons that killed Ethan's mother. I think the backstory may ...
May 12, 2022 -
Re: The Fallen King: Chapter Seven, pt 2
And today I have learnt something new xD%u2026
May 10, 2022 -
Re: The Lie that Saved the World Chapter 1: The smoke in the forest
Thank you so much for the review! I'll definitely re-edit some parts to make it feel less textbook-like. Maybe sprinkle the details as and when necessary instead of an info ...
Mar 24, 2022 -
Re: The Lie that Saved the World Chapter 2: A familiar stranger
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Mar 23, 2022 -
Re: The Lie that Saved the World Chapter 2: A familiar stranger
@SalisRuinen @lehmanf
Mar 23, 2022 -
Re: The Lie that Saved the World Chapter 1: The smoke in the forest
Than you so much for the review! Yeah, I scrapped Agent Rider and started over. It%u2019s a different story with the same characters and a new title. Just ignore everything ...
Mar 23, 2022 -
Re: Agent Rider - Chapter 1: Ethan Rider
Thank you so much for the review! I am in the process of rewriting many of the chapters posted here so I'll definitely try and slow the pace down. There ...
Mar 12, 2022 -
Re: Agent Rider Chapter 11: Old Wounds
Thank you so much for the review. After talking with some people who are following my book (not on this site), I%u2019ve decided it%u2019s best if I have Ethan NOT ...
Mar 9, 2022 -
Re: Agent Rider Chapter 10:From the Ashers
Thank you so much for the review. I think I should have explicitly mentioned South Africa as the place the events are taking place instead of mentioning KZN which is ...
Mar 1, 2022 -
Re: Agent Rider Chapter 10:From the Ashers
I completely forgot to tag you @lehmanf @SalisRuinen
Feb 27, 2022 -
Re: Agent Rider Chapter 10:From the Ashers
Thank you so much for the review. I%u2019ll be sure to look at the sentence length and I agree the fight does seem like it%u2019s between two puppets as opposed ...
Feb 27, 2022 -
Re: Agent Rider Chapter 9: The end of the prologue
Thanks so much for the review. I%u2019ll definitely proof read and reword this chapter. (I%u2019ll probably do that for all the chapters thus far before I start writing again). And ...
Feb 22, 2022
