VengefulReaper

Hi Lim! Thanks for the review! I think Ethan's response to the Beltian refugees being taken in does need a bit of tweaking. I'm right there with you on that ...

Hi Lim! Thanks for the review! I think Ethan's response to the Beltian refugees being taken in does need a bit of tweaking. I'm right there with you on that ...

Thanks for the review, Lim! I think I was trying to do too much too quickly in this chapter lol. I wasn't quite sure how to transition between these scenes. ...

Pls tag me. Haven't read a supernatural in a while so I wanna pick this up when I have time.

Thanks for the review, Lim. Part of my idea for John and Steve was for them to both be opposites of each other while each having their own level of ...

Thanks for the review Paige! You actually jumped in the middle of things. The novel starts at the chapter titled prologue followed by Chapter 0 and *then* this one %uD83D%uDE05

Thanks for the review, Lim! To answer your question, I%u2019d say that there%u2019s a certain level of satisfaction we gain from being respected, admired and loved. One that money or ...

Thanks for the review, Salis! I am so glad you've enjoyed the extended prologue and that the characters have grown on you. (Sigvald being the biggest surprise for me among ...

Thanks for the review, Lim! I certainly need to tweak that conversation between Jim and Steve about Ethan. There are some holes that you've pointed out that need fixing. Also, ...

Thanks for the review, Lim! I'm glad you enjoyed Chapter 0. The sense of time feels a bit off because of the time skips (like it didn%u2019t really feel as ...

Thanks for the review! The points you raised are super helpful and I'll definitely edit the chapter with those in mind. With regards to Secronium hat do they mean between ...

Thanks for the review, Salis! One of the aspects of Secronium I wanted to convey was that it was very 'high risk high reward'. I'm glad you picked up on ...

Thanks for the review! The flashbacks should be getting less as the chapters go on xD. I wanted the flashbacks Ethan has to feel connected to places or objects so ...

Thanks for the review Andrew! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. I'll tweak the parts you suggested to feel less clunky.

Thanks for the review Salis! I'm so glad you're enjoying the slower chapters thus far. You're dead right on the topic of Ethan's decision to join the Alliance. It certainly ...