VengefulReaper

This is the YWS version of a Rickroll and I love it.

Thanks for the review, Andrew! I totally missed that inconsistency with Steve. Thanks for picking it up. Somehow, things like this just slip through despite me reading over it so ...

Thanks for the review! I'll try and fit in the flashback a little more naturally. It does kind of disorient you coming from last chapter. Thanks for catching onto that. ...

Winter isn't too bad here since it's tropical weather. Back some stuff for the beach (there are some really nice ones down here). I only really know Indian cuisine but ...

Thanks for the review, Andrew! I think you may have skipped chapter 0, the end which is the end of the extended prologue. Sorry about the crazy order of the ...

Thanks for the review, Kaia! My comma placement needs a lot of work lol. Grammar has never been my strength so keep pulling out the mistakes as you go along. ...

Oh btw, do you want me to continue with I Knew or review your current novel? I don%u2019t mind either. Whatever is more helpful to you, I%u2019ll go with! :)

Hi Kaia! Thanks for the review! The novel actually starts at Prologue, followed by chapter 0 parts 1-6 and then chapter 1 onwards. I initially wrote this novel without a ...

Ahh%u2026 I see. That happens and I actually admire that. Sometimes a novel can be a stepping stone to the next and it does not always have to be perfect. ...

Good to have you back, mate! It%u2019s a pleasure reading your novel on this site and I%u2019m glad I%u2019ll be getting more of it!

Not a problem at all. It's a pleasure to read your work tbh. With regards to description, I think a good rule of thumb is: can the scene/action do without ...

Yeah it does! Thanks for the advice.

Oh, don't worry! These are my reviews after 50 reviews. When I started out mine were a lot worse but I've found you get better at writing AND reviewing here. ...

Thanks for the review, Nate! I'm really glad you caught onto the bickering and indecision of the council. I actually got the idea from a quote I read in a ...

Hi Lim! Thanks for the review! I think Ethan's response to the Beltian refugees being taken in does need a bit of tweaking. I'm right there with you on that ...