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Re: Iceflame// Chapter 18: Get Ready for Hell
Hi, just here to leave a quick review! Sorry for being so inconsistent lately. I've been writing too much and reviewing too little xD. Now, into the chapter. I really ...
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Re: Iceflame// Chapter 16: The Challenge
Hey Salis! Just here to leave a quick review. So it's been AN ETERNITY AND A HALF since I've reviewed some of your chapters but I'm picking it up from ...
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Re: The Fallen King: Chapter Eight, pt 3
Hi Andrew, just here to leave a quick review. It's been quite a while since I've picked up your story so apologies if I do miss some things here and ...
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Re: Iceflame// Chapter 17: The First One
Hey, just here to leave a quick review after an eternity of absence! Overall, this is a really great chapter to introduce the class battle and the stakes at hand. ...
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Re: The Fallen King: Chapter Eight, pt 2
Hey, just here with a quick review. I've just realized I haven't reviewed your other parts of chapter eight so here we go. This chapter had some pretty good world-building ...
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Re: The Fallen King: Chapter Eight
Hey, just here to leave a quick review! I guess I am a few days late because well... Life *heavy sigh*. Anyway, let's get to the chapter. Most of what ...
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Re: Chapter one: Can we really start over?
Hey, just here to leave a quick review. At first glance, there are a lot of grammatical errors in your chapter. Sometimes you use commas instead of full stops. I ...
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Re: Iceflame// Chapter 15: At the Octohorn Ring
Hey, just here to leave a quick review! Well, this chapter just had a massive tone shift that I did not see coming. One moment we're having fun with the ...
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Re: Iceflame// Chapter 14: Song's Not Over
Hey, just here with a quick review! This chapter covered a decent amount of ground when it came to Ulura's character. I thought she'd be the average bully character that ...
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Re: Iceflame// Chapter 13: Start the Change
Hey, just here to leave a quick review! Overall, this was a great chapter with a lot of lore into how devas work (static vs active) which was much needed ...
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Re: Iceflame// Chapter 12: Meet the Elite
Hey, just here to leave a quick review! This was a good aftermath chapter here. One thing you have done really well is giving us an explanation of the absence ...
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Re: Iceflame// Chapter 11: The Joy
Hey, here with a quick review! I am indeed back from the dead and intend to catch up with your works now that I have fallen behind so badly. My ...
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Re: The Fallen King: Chapter Seven, pt 2
Hey! Here to leave a quick review. Overall thoughts: A great cooldown chapter after all the heart-racing stuff with Matt and the huge lore drops with grandpa and Arwen's story. ...
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Re: The Fallen King: Chapter Seven
Hey! I'm finally back from the dead (get it because I'm a reaper... yeah... nevermind) Just here to leave a quick review! Overall thoughts: It's a great chapter. The story ...
May 10, 2022 -
Re: The Fallen King: Chapter Six
Hey, just here to leave a quick review! Firstly, yes, the questions at the end of the chapter help a lot as I do look at what you want me ...
Mar 24, 2022
