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Re: I Knew Chapter 2
Hey, Kaia. Just here to leave a quick review! FIRST IMPRESSIONS Well, this took a turn for the worse. Actually, I thought it was going to be a car crash ...
Apr 23, 2023 -
Re: I Knew Chapter 1
Hi KaiaJersaga! Just here to leave a quick review since I saw yours was sitting in the Green Room for a bit. FIRST IMPRESSIONS I really like this first chapter, ...
Apr 12, 2023 -
Re: King of the Court - 0
Hello, hello, Yosh! Just here to leave a quick review! I saw your work floating in the Green Room for a while with no reviews so I decided to pick ...
Mar 1, 2023 -
Re: Shoplifting Vampires (1.0)
Hi Green, here with a review. I actually read this piece when it first went into the green room, wrote half a review, aaaand forgot to finish it (smh). So ...
Feb 20, 2023 -
Re: Iceflame// Chapter 23: Advantage Thiefs
Hi Salis, back with another review for you! First Impressions Another exciting chapter that really keeps up the tempo and intensity of the class battle. I really love how you ...
Feb 20, 2023 -
Re: The Vamp (Chapter One)
Hi, Lucrezia. I saw your chapter floating around in the Green Room and decided to give it a review. FIRST IMPRESSIONS This is a really solid opening to your novel. ...
Feb 5, 2023 -
Re: The Fallen King: Chapter Nine, pt 3
Hey Andrew! Just here to leave a quick review for you. Some initial thoughts here... I really like Liam in this chapter. In fact, having all of chapter nine be ...
Feb 5, 2023 -
Re: Iceflame// Chapter 22: Bolt All Over the Place
Hey Salis! Just here to drop a quick review... FIRST IMPRESSIONS I really like how you've transitioned from this grandiose birds-eye-view of the battlefield in the last chapter to a ...
Nov 30, 2022 -
Re: Bluejay: Prologue
Hey, Necromancer. Just here to leave a quick review for you. First Impressions I really like this prologue. The world you've immersed me into sounds really interesting. It's not too ...
Nov 24, 2022 -
Re: Iceflame// Chapter 21: Welcome to the Clash
Hey, I'm back with a quick review for you! Initial thoughts This chapter is probably the most hyped I have been since Ulura's battle with Yuki earlier on. The build ...
Nov 21, 2022 -
Re: Iceflame// Chapter 20: On the Eve of the Battle
After an eternity and a half, I am finally back! Hopefully... Life has been throwing more plot twists than this chapter. But as of right now, I'm going to try ...
Nov 10, 2022 -
Re: The Fallen King: Chapter Nine, pt 2
After an eternity and a half, I have come back to revisit the Fallen King. It feels like the last time I reviewed here was when the Old Tongue was ...
Nov 10, 2022 -
Re: The Fallen King: Chapter Nine
Hey Andrew! Just here to leave a quick review. As for first impressions, I really like the pace of this chapter. Even though it's very slow, the descriptions kept me ...
Sep 23, 2022 -
Re: Iceflame// Chapter 19: Strategy
Hey Salis! Just here to leave a quick review. Well, for starters, I really enjoyed this chapter. It's very dialogue heavy and very strategic which I appreciate as opposed to ...
Sep 23, 2022 -
Re: The Fallen King: Chapter Eight, pt 4
Hey, just here to leave a quick review. So I haven't reviewed your work in ages and I'm hoping to get caught up over the next few weeks or so. ...
Sep 4, 2022