Velvet.whispers

Wow, those spelling mistakes are absolutely shameful, i think that's my cue to go to bed!! I'm glad you enjoyed this, the punctuation of the last verse is a choice ...

B lack sailed tears are held at bay, By armies of smiles during the day; But by night they sneak across the rocks, Balmly accosting to suddenly abandoned docks. L ...

Love is the spring that never runs dry, Even when it's burning. Love is the only truthful lie: The one secret worth learning. Love is a phoenix reborn from its ...

Hey to all, sorry for not being more prompt at answering. Well my interests really are quite varied and i haven't time to elaborate, but any form of art has ...

Hey I'm another newby! I live in Paris and I'm bilingual and I really enjoy writing! (Check out my short story I posted in other fiction to get an idea ...

I like the atmosphere and the writing in itself, I am however rather disturbed by your use of the angel/devil theme because I do find it dreadfully inappropriate while dealing ...

I'm not sure if we're supposed to justify some our choices here or not. I do really like the idea of spacing out the quote rather than having it just ...

Poetry wise, I agree with everyone else, this flows, has humour, etc... Unfortunately, I do believe, like lilchoma that to defend the gay cause you have to take it from ...

“ There is a willow grows aslant a brook That shows his hoar leaves in the glassy stream. ”… Ophelia did not just dislike the others. She despised them. Everyday ...

This is nice, it has rhythm and a rather sing-song quality to it! And confusing people is a quality not a fault!! Keep writing!

Your writing is nice and to the point, even if this is rather clichéd... In the fourth stanza, last line you've added an unnecessary apostrophe so correct that type but ...