Velvet.whispers

Thank you!

Revenge will be sweet and ugg american spelling i cannot stomach x

What is "star-crossed" or "carefully-worded"?! Cause flowery is a bit girly :p God I'm bored please don't abandon me! pps have I mentioned how much I looove this poem?! Oh ...

Ah yes, star-crossed you mean! x ps well I prefer yours but Valentine prefers mine probably because it's in your face rather than carefully worded :p

This is beautiful and reminds me I should go to bed! Well done! It should be while we were in a slumber grammatically speaking but there's nothing wrong with taking ...

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Hey! Yes it is suppose to be one poem that gains momentum by adding the seperate bits together, Keats does this quite a lot as do other poets x

We met one night, in the dark, the fear, We exchanged smiles, I held my glass up to you, played with my hair, crossed my legs, flirted like crazy. We ...

Sorry tamara, I haven't been to those other places, but i happen to have spent the holiday in switzerland and to live in Oxford!

SWITZERLAND OXFORD

Ok, I'll go through this line by line "I'm slowly falling adrift" Falling and adrift kind of contradict themselves, is that intentional? I also don't think you need slowly plus ...

This is nice, if a bit too long and self conscious in my opinion, but that's just me. This sound like stupid advice, but try and listen to the words, ...