Veiyloxx

The Crow people not The Joker

I agree with everyone else this is short but pretty good, ill never tell you it needs to be better only you can decide if it needs to be better ...

What are you trying to do here... If you haven't gotten it already i dont need to improve as far poems and poetry goes young one. I post here to ...

The full moon shines bright Stars gaze down No clouds around A light mist of rain Under a big willow tree I Touch her face and looked in her beautiful ...

Go read my comment again i never attacked the poets i attacked the reviewers that dont know anything about reveiwing poems. And i would never judge ones poem, the only ...

Look I understand That some of the young people here might not have studied poetry yet or might not even going to in school. But I have, and Poetry is ...

Listen yall... "your" is slang not that, that matters because it doesn't. Poetry is the only exception to literary work that punctuation doesn't have to be applied. So for those ...

The Lord above created you for me to love He picked me out of all the rest Because he knew I would love you best I had a heart and ...

The Lord above created you for me to love He picked me out of all the rest Because he knew I would love you best Take care oh my heart ...

this is what my hair looks like before it gets long.

oh and as for you TruthTeller, how dare you come up on this site and start judging people by the way they look. You are an immuture little person. You ...

This is what Veiyloxx would almost look like in my book. change the hair color to brown and a little wavy change the eye color to green if you could ...

Just because something rhymes more not doesn't make it good or bad. A poem can have rhyme or not and it still be good. From my experience its hard to ...

To be completly honest i can relate to this poem which sounds kind weird, when you have had a broken heart like mine you never really recover from it but, ...

Really good I must say, simple but strong. It doesn't mater how long or short it is, simple or strong, what maters is what it means and how it is ...