VehementWriter

[spoiler] Red = My corrections. Purple = My Suggestions. [s]Strikethrough[/s] = Omit Beside Carmen, Nora’s face came into view, her eyes puzzled as they glanced at his shaking palms. The ...

[spoiler] Red = My corrections. Purple = My Suggestions. [s]Strikethrough[/s] = Omit Shrugging off the sheets, I let my feet fall to the floor. My toes rejected it, curling in ...

[spoiler] Red = My corrections. Purple = My Suggestions. In only a few moments, the manor came into view. The elderly Victorian-style home rested just off the gravel driveway, its ...

Grammar stuff: [spoiler] Red = My corrections. Purple = My Suggestions. “Morning, Carmen.” I smiled, and he affectionately ruffled my hair. Then I turned to face each of the others ...

Hey. I really want to review this, but I don't have time right now. Do you mind if I do it tomorrow? I promise I'll get to it. But, I ...

Hmm, I think this sounds pretty good... For starters, definitely go with the romance... haha Also, I second what Smaur said... Just fill in those plot holes and I think ...

Firstly, the boring technicalities: [spoiler] Red = My corrections. Purple = My Suggestions. Small Purple = My comments. Italics = What I’ll be commenting on. [s]Strikethrough[/s] = Omit ¶ = ...

First, grammar corrections and the boring technicalities: [spoiler] Red = My corrections. Purple = My Suggestions. [s]Strikethrough[/s] = Omit The human knight ran faster, dodging low branches, jumpin

Silence. Yes, the rain pounded against the ground. The rubber in our shoes squeaked upon connecting with the drenched grass underneath our feet. The leaves on the trees around us ...

Hmm, I actually really like this. I haven't personally read many stories from a male POV, much less romances, and I think you have a good thing going here. One ...

Basically, it would seem my imagination saves its best workings for some select times at night when I'm sleeping. A couple of weeks ago I had this dream, and now ...

I like this... I think for an introduction you've done a pretty good job... I would just second what Sam said (lovely name by the way ^_^ *is also called ...

Thanks for the heads up on the rules! I'll definitely get to work on reviewing some work pretty soon. Me? Romance is my favorite both to read and write... I'll ...

Hii!! You can call me Sam. Writing has been a passion of mine for almost 5 years (started up when I was 11, I'll be 16 in June), and more ...