VehementWriter

Grammar: [spoiler] Red = My corrections. Purple = My Suggestions. Small Purple = My comments. Italics = What I’ll be commenting on. [s]Strikethrough[/s] = Omit ¶ = I started new ...

Do the trees everywhere have any symbolic meaning, you think? :) That would be neat! I'm not sure. I mean, the dream was that way, but I'm not sure if ...

So I need to head off to [a really late] lunch any minute now, so I just did a quick read through this... that basially means I did no grammar ...

Grammar corrections and boring technicalities: [spoiler] Red = My corrections. Purple = My Suggestions. [s]Strikethrough[/s] = Omit She l ay there under the stars in the lukewarm spring night. Her ...

[spoiler] Red = My corrections. Purple = My Suggestions. [s]Strikethrough[/s] = Omit “What are you doing here?” I blurted before I could stop myself. Isaac looked amused. “Hi to you ...

[spoiler] Red = My corrections. Purple = My Suggestions. [s]Strikethrough[/s] = Omit Elena smiled softly and joined me on the mossy log. “That is one of the wonders of our ...

[spoiler] Red = My corrections. Purple = My Suggestions. [s]Strikethrough[/s] = Omit It was as though I had entered a world in absence of light. The night closed in on ...

[spoiler] Red = My corrections. Purple = My Suggestions. [s]Strikethrough[/s] = Omit Carmen sat beside me, his body heat feeling oddly warm against mine. He must have felt it , ...

[spoiler] Red = My corrections. Purple = My Suggestions. [s]Strikethrough[/s] = Omit I also couldn’t ignore that at his sudden appearance, my senses were screaming at me to run. I ...

[spoiler] Red = My corrections. Purple = My Suggestions. [s]Strikethrough[/s] = Omit Nate’s eyes were closed, the lids a blackish-blue color of fatigue, along with full moons circling them. His ...

[spoiler] Red = My corrections. Purple = My Suggestions. [s]Strikethrough[/s] = Omit “Yes I will. I can provide them with information they don’t have. We need to find Nate as ...

[spoiler] Red = My corrections. Purple = My Suggestions. [s]Strikethrough[/s] = Omit Many vampires, I could hear, w[s]h[/s]ere in their separate dormitories, forced out—no doubt—by Philip and Walt

[spoiler] Red = My corrections. Purple = My Suggestions. [s]Strikethrough[/s] = Omit I knew what had happened to him. He had let his primal side get the better of him ...

Woo, almost no corrections this time around: [spoiler] Red = My corrections. Purple = My Suggestions. [s]Strikethrough[/s] = Omit Inside the cottage, she seemed plain, even unrecognizable. But here in

[spoiler] Red = My corrections. Purple = My Suggestions. [s]Strikethrough[/s] = Omit The back road we took to Rebecca’s old coven was rocky and many vampires took to the trees ...