Vball9010

This is a great and very creative and insightful poem. It takes me into another world that is fascinating, yet terrible. It is a dramatic change from a sky full ...

Wow! This is a beautiful poem! I love how the setting is at the beach. I love it! The footsteps and memories part was wonderful! I don't know what else ...

This story is very descriptive, like how you describe the lights and marketplace thing. Although that made it very interesting, I think the main character should be described a little ...

Bang. Bang. Bang. Ugh! Who the heck bangs on your door that hard in the middle of the night? Seeing as my parents are away on vacation, there is no ...

Wow! That was very nicely written. It oozed mystery and tradgedy, but also wisdom. I really like that section about caring for the fire or it will set the whole ...

I really liked this story! It was interesting to read through the simple words of a child. I greatly enjoy reading about war time stories, even though most, like yours, ...