Vasticity

Hi. First off, the only problems I can find with your formatting is in the character names, you have a colon after the name and no enter space. Dialog shouldn't ...

All right, there's a lot of things that need to be dealt with so I'm just going to go all at once: 1. This is too short. 2. There's no ...

uhhh ARE YOU STILL THERE.JPG

my characters are like imaginary friends. they're all there and we have conversations all the time. and no, I'm not joking about this

okay, so, this is going to be a long review, but I recommend that you really listen to what I'm saying if you seriously want to get into scripts. First ...

Post pictures of your favorite pies

It would all come together eventually this guy punches snakes right in the face.JPG

Bored and tired: Picture 006.jpg however I look like this when I'm NOT bored and tired as well

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Hi! This needs a bit of work. A: Your punctuation and spelling is way off. Hehehe this is what you call easy money! Aah life is good. There should be ...

Once in YWS Screencaps thread Annie talk like caveman

Against her will, I posted this. This is only a small peek at Lav's ultimate fail. It goes on for a while, so get used to it. I don't mind, ...

Hey again. The mistakes will be pointed out in red, while my critique on that part will be in blue. It is raining Steady and consistent I am alone Safe ...

hey there. While there's no spelling or grammar errors that I can see, this is really too short to articulate a story or give the reader anything new or even ...

That had better be me