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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: O Pandora

    Okay. Cool, I needed this. A lot, apparently. This is precisely the reason why I stopped writing poetry. Crap like this came out. To hit and to miss.

    Jan 27, 2005
  • Lounge, The Re: Mood Music?

    My First Kiss at the Public Execution by The Blood Brothers makes me happy enough to do something. Write or draw or scream. Whichever comes first. It's such a sexually ...

    Jan 27, 2005
  • Lounge, The Re: The Writing Quiz

    70. I thought the test was purely biased based on the quiz author's experiences. There's a lot of stuff that's not considered-- time constraints, personalities, etc. A writer does not ...

    Jan 27, 2005
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hey.

    Mmm. Dack Janiels. Thanks, man. Hey Adri. Me, I write anything and everything, given the time, the inspiration, and enough pretty Scottish boys. Some people they call this motivation . ...

    Jan 27, 2005
  • Lyric Poetry Re: new

    Nice imagery at some parts but some of it was awkward ('honey dripping off a knife'? it's not something most people actually would see, and the ink from mouth thing, ...

    Jan 27, 2005
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: O Pandora

    -(13+ for a word or two. I forget where I am.)- Your eyes are on a box pupils are vaccuums I'm watching you gorge on gore on fantasy on medical ...

    Jan 27, 2005
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: That Word

    I don't much like it. It's just. Well, it's missing something. It's missing a lot for me. When you say die, I don't feel anything. Do you believe what you're ...

    Jan 27, 2005
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hey.

    Even generic whiskey brands you find in manga like Dack Janiels? And Dudmeiser? I could really go for a Liller Mite right now.

    Jan 23, 2005
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Dead Letter To The World

    You really do seem very tired. But then I got tired. After the first stanza I just got really, you know. Tired. This is a rant, not a poem. You ...

    Jan 23, 2005
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hey.

    Oh my. What a gift. Thanks ^_^

    Jan 23, 2005
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hey.

    I suggested to a friend I wanted to crash a good party, and now I have unceremoniously crashed this party. Thank you, darling Teren. My dreams are fulfilled. So how ...

    Jan 23, 2005


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