Vari

Thank you for your reply, I appreciate someone telling my story does have it faults but doesn't seem to completely suck (at the moment). This is the first time I've ...

I agree with Ice Princess, in the first paragraph especially there's too much information. To be honest it seems like you're summing up what happened in the previous novel. Seeing ...

I've had a slight problem when trying to add this chapter to a novel. Until this is resolved I've decided to post my chapters somewhere else. Please look for my ...