Vapor

These are all very amazing. The way you can capture a person without them seemingly being "all posed out" is absolutely great. I feel like you get the lighting right ...

Another one of my crappy vent poetry things. Again, not proper poetry, or at least I wasn't going for that. Sorry. There you are again. I don't really know who ...

Hello! I managed to mess up making my novel. Originally I thought I should think realistically and mark the first chapter of my novel down as a short story, since ...

Yes. I am glazing over the characters at the moment. That's purposefully done. I want to build up the charactes as the book goes on. I like it when descriptions ...

Hello there! This is very good. The shading looks really great from what I can see. I have to admit, the camera you took it with is not good quality, ...

That was great. It kept me hanging on my seat, kept me wanting to get to the next sentence. I didn't miss a word, which I haven't really been able ...

Okay, so this chapter answers a few questions and straightens some things out--I hope. I read this one out loud, but that's a problem because some sentence structure still won't ...

This is absolutely beautiful! The imagery and detail is astounding. I really do love this nice short story, but I also feel a little confused. There's a lot left up ...

I'll be honest I'm not into zombie films, or games. The closest to zombie I get is I Am Legend, which this reminds me a lot of. :) Anyway, I ...

Just a warning, I've only run through this once looking for grammatical errors and generally making sure it makes some sense and flows a little. So it's probably pretty crummy ...

This is great! I think that it's well done, despite the fact it's really sad. Sorry, this isn't much of a review, but I wanted to tell you I think ...

Chapter 3! Yeah! Anyway, another good chapter for DF. I like the new twist, Mr. Sabre joining the gang. I didn't see that coming, but it's a good addition, I ...

This is beautiful. I saw your other daffodil work too, with the yellow background. I must say I like this one a lot better. Like said, your lines are so ...

This is a really good poem, I enjoyed it a lot, though it's a depressing matter. I just have a few questions about the wording I wanted to bring to ...

CHAPTER 2!!!! -happydance- I enjoyed this chapter just as much as the first one. My only complaint is, dang it why can't Pandora just come out and say she's Swan ...