VanillaTwilight93

Dude, I love this story. Please write more soon. Lol. :) It's very suspenseful and keeps you on the edge of your seat. Probably the only useful thing I can ...

It was good. Definitely different. I liked it. Maybe make it a little longer? It was really short. You might could try explaining it a little bit. Otherwise it was ...

Love From Music Chapter 3 Slam! Kaylin woke with a start as a door slammed shut. When she opened her eyes, she saw that her wrists were still bound, but ...

Okay. I really like this story. It's got an edge of suspense to it. I think that that is what keeps most people reading is that they have to know ...

It was really good and detailed. However, there were a few grammar mistakes...unless you put them in there intentionally. Lol. Shew? I think show or showed? Usualed to? Maybe used ...

Love From Music Chapter 2 When Kaylin woke up, she had a splitting headache, and she felt slightly sick to her stomach. She had no clue where she was. After ...

Lol. It'll make sense once I get more put up. That's just the beginning. There is more coming soon. :)

Chapter 1 It was raining. Kaylin was sitting on her bed crying. Earlier that day she had seen her boyfriend Alex making out with some other girl. “How could he ...

I loved it. It was great. Still confusing the forms of there again. Just be kinda careful with that. Other than that, I thought it was great. :) I can't ...

Wow. I loved this story. It was absolutely amazing. :) As soon as I'm done here I'm going to go read the next part. There were a few grammar errors. ...

Hey! Vanilla here. I really like your story. I really want to read more. :) There were a few grammar errors. I noticed that you were using the wrong forms ...

Hi. VanillaTwilight here. I just gotta say that I loved this piece. It demonstrates perfectly what so many girls go through. I really didn't find any grammar errors. I loved ...

Okay. Personally I thought it was good. A little short, but good. However, I definitely reccommend proof reading. There were a few instances where your subject didn't agree with your ...

Hey, JD. I just want to say first that i love this story, and the way you incorporated the John Mayer song is really awesome. It had a good story ...

Ah! I want to read more. :) It was really good. I think this has already been said, but it definitely flows smoothly. I really couldn't see any problems with ...