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Re: Year 3000 (intro, rough draft, chapter 1)
Thank you both for reviewing my work. You really helped me out with editting. I don't exactly have an eye for detail... I honestly don't know why the 3/4 thing ...
Nov 2, 2010 -
Re: Year 3000 (intro, rough draft, chapter 1)
Year 3000 So, we all have wondered at one point in our lives how our world came about. It a curious thing, actually, to really get into the thought. You ...
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Re: Life Changing Books
Just thought I'd cut in real fast I've read My Sister's Keeper. Great book! Jodi Picoult wrote it :lol: . Just thought I'd let you know. :D
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Re: Nelson Mandela: The man made of peace
Nelson Mandela A man that wanted peace A man that wanted rights One idea misunderstood Twenty - seven years to fight Eighteen years on Robben Island Eighteen years of no ...
Jan 1, 2010 -
Re: Ragdoll
Oops! Sorry, I forgot that. I kept switching him from a human to a ragdoll. xD His ragdoll name shall be... Feathers! :D
Dec 29, 2009 -
Re: Ragdoll
Actually... I'll just make the ragdoll. :) Name: Drake White Ragdoll Age: 21 Appearance: Before: Drake was often considered a very high-class looking man. He wore black tuxedos and other ...
Dec 28, 2009 -
Re: Ragdoll
Hm... This sounds like fun. May I reserve a spot as a Human and their Ragdoll?
Dec 28, 2009 -
Re: Warriors: Moonhigh Chapter 1 Part 2
I stalked through the forest, crashing through fern clumps and Elder bushes, being scratched by branches of thorn patches, nettles, and brambles. Somehow, I had always found myself circling back ...
Dec 25, 2009 -
Re: Paranoia (Editted Ch. 1-3 and Ch. 4-6)
Thank you very much, everyone. Your comments helped me. And yes... I suppose it is a bit boring in the beginning. xDD Sorry about that. And thank you about the ...
Dec 25, 2009 -
Re: Is there such thing as...
Okay. I am currently writing a story, and I'm enjoying writing it very much. It's about a man who is extremely paranoid. ( It has a better plot than that, ...
Dec 24, 2009 -
Re: Paranoia (Editted Ch. 1-3 and Ch. 4-6)
I editted my first three chapters, and wrote more to it. I hope you guys like it! :D I need a lot of critisism please. And don;t worry, I won't ...
Dec 24, 2009 -
Re: Paranoia (Chapter 1-3)
Thank you so much! :D You really gave me some great idea's, and I think I'll try to go back over my work a little slower. :lol: And I could ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: Paranoia (Chapter 1-3)
Chapter 1 I sat up in bed, stretching my long arms. They spread out on either side of me like two leaves on a flower, and I smiled. I flapped ...
Dec 5, 2009 -
Re: Beauty is...
Thank you. I'm sorry if I sounded like I wasn't trying to take criticism, I didn't mean to be that harsh. :( But thank you again for your help, I ...
Nov 26, 2009 -
Re: Beauty is...
Um... Thank you for the review, but I did answer the question. :lol: Notice in the last verse I say 'True beauty is the mind'. :lol: The poem was just ...
Nov 25, 2009
