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Re: Fire On Water: Chapter One (edited)
Hello! I came across this story last night and read it, making mental notes about some things in it, and I wanted to write you a bit of constructive criticism. ...
Dec 18, 2009
Hello! I came across this story last night and read it, making mental notes about some things in it, and I wanted to write you a bit of constructive criticism. ...
Dec 18, 2009
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