Vanadis

Durrie, this is great! It doesn't suck. As I've said, it's one of those things that could be so much worse and still be awesome for the sheer humor of ...

Merlin: I normally write Norse-based things, so one day, I shall have you a story about a Valkyrie. 'Til then, I recommend Tolkien's "Legend of Sigurd and Gudrun."

I like this, Mo; "Colour is the seed of life." That's absolutely true. First of all, I think the lines should be cleaned up a little bit; you can still ...