Vanadis

Hello Angel! I want you to do something for me. Do it! Look at my signature; the one about the poetry. This poem is that one or two poems that ...

Greetings, Janay! I'm Vanadis, and I'll be giving my input; take it or leave it, but here's to hoping it helps some! I felt it best if I put my ...

Your poem has a good rhyme scheme and reads with a nice, easy flow. You did well with explaining things as they happened without going back or forward and then ...

I agree; Wordpress is very good, professional, and easy to use. Even I can use it! *is not very technologically literate, for the record.*

"Nothing; they're both tiny."

I could be interested. :)

Hello! Okay, so yes, when I asked if it was yummy, you should have said, "Affirmative." You said in chat that it would be a long review, and I agree. ...

Hello, your Magey-ness. So, as I've already told you, I'm not great at reviewing poetry (as much as I enjoy reading it,) but here are some things I think might ...

Hello! Nitpicks welcome? Okay. From what I saw, first you need to clean up the grammar, so I'm going to make suggestions on a paragraph-by-paragraph basis: We didn't want this ...

Hello! First of answer your questions. Jericho seems to be a good name for him so far. I think we'd have to see further what his aims are; we really ...

>.< Thanks for the reviews; I'm totally killing this and re-writing, so I'll keep you guys' comments in mind. Yeah, the "edge" thing, though...It's not a zone. It's the edge ...

For the “Awesome Choice Contest.” **Something that includes the words: hedgehog, arrow, narcissist, sunshine, magic, pine cone, pincushion, and DJ. I feel like this may need more chapters. Sunshin

Hello you! I'm really liking this story so far. The moving away, being alone with no friends, hating life...that's something a lot of people can really relate to. However, some ...

]Wow. That was exquisite, and the feelings are definitely true. It's a somewhat common scenario, but portrayed in a way that makes it seem like she is very alone in ...

Hello again. Hope your new year's going worst, it should just feel like 2009, right? To the fixings! Two things were immediately clear to Stephanie. One: They were obviously lying. ...