Vanadis

Hello Kat. I'm Van. ^^ First I'm going to put comments into your work, like so: A pile of bones is talking to me, blinking. >I like these lines. It ...

Hello! So this is an okay concept. I often hear the phrase "sands of time" in music, see it in books and movies, so when I look at this poem ...

Hello! I really liked this piece. The idea was fresh and unique and the twist at the end was very nice! I also like they way it builds up from ...

Hello! I'm "Van" and I'll be reviewing. So I really like what you've written here. It's quite simplistic in idea, and the simple language and setup mirrors that wonderfully. The ...

Hello you! Okay, yes, it was cheesy, I agree; but it was cheesy in a different, unique way. I like the way the lines are set up and the rhythm. ...

A prose-poem! Wow, I haven't seen one of those in a while. This is very good. I can't honestly say I'd change anything; I like how you personify the pea ...

I woke my dude up from the other room laughing so hard! This is epic, Jiggy! (for instance, someone falling down stairs as they backed away in terror) My absolute ...

*glomps.* Leza! Okay. So I like this. It's nice. Reminds me of just a lone sailor, staring out into the sea, having a conversation with it because a) there's no ...

lol...now Squiggly...that's something. I'm glad you liked it. But as I said, we couldn't even call it alpha; we had to say "temperature coefficient of reactivity," or they made us ...

Fishy, fishy, fishy T, push-ups are no good for me. So I must stop calling thee fishy, fishy, fishy T. ...and now for the REAL poem! Crazy people, she says! ...

Hello. Although poems full of questions are usually off-putting, I have to agree with empress on this one. Since your title was an answer, basically, it was okay (to me) ...

This is a beautiful piece. I love how you can "feel" a memory, and as silly a concept as tasting an eraser would be to me, it adds so much ...

Hello again. This one's got potential. To me, it reminds me of people who hide from everything--from life itself. It seems like you're calling out to these types and saying, ...

Greetings again! I decided to check out some of your other work and found this. I have to say I really like it; I'm a sucker for the medieval, damsel-in-distress ...

Hello! First of all I want to welcome you to YWS. I hope you'll enjoy your stay! I'm first going to quote your poem with my thoughts in red; I ...