Vanadis

Verdandi considered Tin's words. "You have some good points. You're right that we'd have the high ground. Also, since most of us use bows, we could take out any elven ...

Cotton candy! Vanadis

Verdandi grudgingly put her pack over her shoulder and got up, shaking her braids out, and she walked over to the group. Really, she didn't feel at fault so much ...

Verdandi regarded the group silently for a moment, and then spoke up. "Did I not say 'with the permission of the humans?' There will be no forcing anyone into anything. ...

Hiya Inkwell! You know, I never seemed to mention how much I love your avatar. Brian is totally the best thing since pancakes. So, anyway, on to the review. I ...

Verdandi looked out at the mountains, wide-eyed in thought. "Well," she began slowly, "this may seem a bit...crazy, but there is power in these mountains. They were formed by the ...

Verdandi headed straight for the foothills where there was a small grove of trees. We could hide out there for a short period, she thought, so long as no one ...

Hiya Pudin! I really love this. I like how you've got it somewhat as dialogue, but in poem form. I can't say I've ever seen that before, personally. It's very ...

Hiya Patatopie! Welcome to YWS! You've got a good idea going here. It's very easy to relate to, which is good in poetry. I'm just wondering about the last two ...

Hiya Matt! You've got something pretty cool going on here. There's just a need for a little more something. I don't like your psychology, messing around with my head. Listen ...

Hiya Pretty Crazy! So, you posted in my thread, and here I am! First of all: Wow. Bats! This is a really great idea, in my opinion. Bats, being nocturnal, ...

Hello there! I see you are new, so first I'd like to welcome you to YWS! I'm a third who can't seem to work out what this poem is. When ...

Hello there Sting! I see you are quite new-ish, so I'll first say welcome to YWS! I hope you're finding it awesome. Yay, a poem about writer's block! I've seen ...

Hello there. I liked how you used different colors and fonts to really add some niftiness and emphasis. I like how you tried to put everything in tune with a ...

Hiya! I like this. It reminds me of my struggles as a kid with nightmares. Some of the reviewers say it's too rushed, or needs punctuation, but I think what ...