Vampyre

Hey guys! Obviously, I'm here to review for all you lovely writers out there! I will review: Poems Artwork Photography All Short Stories (for grammar and spelling mistakes only, I'm ...

Thanks heaps for the review, I really appreciate it. Will edit later when I have time. Thanks again :) Vampyre

Storm The fact that Eli was trying nearly made Storm cry, but more with relief that he had accepted her than anything else. She didn't, though. You didn't survive for ...

Storm Storm smiled at Eli's sudden changing of the subject to her, before realising that meant she actually had to tell my story. His hadn't been as wild as she'd ...

Well, I came to review, but honestly could see no grammar/spelling mistakes, and nothing I would change or correct! I loved your story, and I loved the emotion, and...and...Oh I ...

Aww thanks guys :) Aweqs, I can't change the "Which mannerly devotion is shown in this?" Because that's a Shakespeare quote, but the others are all good suggestions I shall ...

I'd really appreciate it if you could review this. Thanks :) Vampyre

First of all, thank you for your review :) I found it really helpful and I will try to rework it accordingly, your points are all valid :) Only thing ...

Twelve year olds, Empty bottles, Cigarette butts. Facades, Pressures, Expectations So easy just to fake relations. Their skin mottles, Reflecting truth in too-young faces. Children playing grown-up ga

Reading, weaving Moving out of my recession Back into the slipstream The twisted world I’m not ready to give up on And you are at the heart of the matter ...

Hey :) Here comes the Vamp for a review! I'm sorry for the loss of your mother, and I'm really glad you chose to write about it. I really like ...

First of all, thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it :) Yeah, I debated about that, but came to the conclusion that as Death had asked John's colleague ...

Coughing, choking, the chains tangle around his legs; he pulls them up in agony, the stabbing pains permeate his chest as the nail-studded band tightens around his heart...”NO!” The animal ...

Hehe yay, it's just so nice and refreshing to see someone take care of their grammar :)

Here's the Vamp, come to review :P First, title really caught my eye :) Very nice. Legend: Blue - Spelling/grammar mistakes Green - Things I would change Red - Comments ...