Vampyre

Ok, this poem was one of the saddest I've ever written, and preceded by a long, nostalgic talk with one of my friends in England. None of you will understand ...

Mela The oil hissed and spat as I lit the lamps in my small hut. I shook out the match and sat back, enjoying the way the flames cast shadows ...

Arodeth Lothwen "Thank you, I suppose..." I trailed off, turning away from Xavier perhaps a little sooner than was polite. My arms crossed over my chest as I fumed inside ...

Sure! It's fairly long so may take me a little while, but I'll get right on it :) I've looked over it - looks like a pretty good story! 'Pyre

Arodeth Lothwen Whipping out the ever-ready knife strapped to my right wrist, I stopped dead as the ground shuddered and cracked under my feet. I spread my weight out carefully, ...

Hey Silent! Oh I just have to say, I absolutely loved this! It was beautiful, and it was sad, and so emotional it made me wonder if it comes from ...

...And, you're done! Anyone else?

Hey, Vamp here to review, as requested :) Sorry it took me so long to get to it :( Legend: Grammar/spelling/punctuation will be in red , and comments/suggestions will be ...

No one wants a review? Not one soul out there thinks their piece needs critiquing?? *is shocked*

Love love love! 'Tis all I can say. Well, actually it's not, or there'd be no point in me reviewing it. But I do love this piece! Anyway, as usual, ...

Well then, I commend you. I really like the way you manage to make it look like a first poem and also have it readable and well written! One thing ...

NOT ACCEPTING/ RETIRED Hey! I'd really like to be a mentor, so here goes! name: I'm Vampyre, as you can see from my picture over there

Hey, Vampyre here to review for you today :) I really like this piece, to start us off :) It's nice to read, and I like the chaos. However, it ...

In case you don't get my vote from my name

Arodeth Lothwen Though the reason for my quest was to bring honour to the elves that brought me up, only Lothwen was actually there to see me off. She was ...