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Re: 30 Minutes in heaven
I heard Sam yell for the next couples. I was enjoying myself immensely with Tyler. His hand were rubbing my torso up and down. I'd never done somthing like this. ...
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Re: Keri's Love Chapter Two Part Four
Oh yay! Tension, I love it! Cameron is NOT happy with Ryder. I like that you added him in. It gives the story even more spice to it! All that ...
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Re: Be Free
The wind blows sweetly. Whipping my hair ‘round my eyes, like a mask. “Come to me” it calls breathlessly whispering dark nothings in my ear. It calls. “Come to me ...
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Re: Keri's Love Chapter Two Part One (Redone)
Woo! Werewolves! I like his seceret. I like that you chose to use 'goonies' it made me smile everytime I read it.:D This is coming along great! I can't wait ...
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Re: Keri's Love Chapter One Part Two (Redone)
Keri looked at the guy surprised, and was about to ask him who they were, but she didn’t have time for they were already there. The girl glared at Keri ...
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Re: A Clean Bite--Prologue
I know it sounds like them. I've rewritten this. Thanks for the critique though. You should read the rewrite I think it's a little better.
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Re: 30 Minutes in heaven
*Sorry i had to go to school. SIC we haven't come out yet.* Once the crazy boy left he shut the door and it was just Tyler and me again. ...
Apr 14, 2008 -
Re: 30 Minutes in heaven
Sam slammed the door behind Tyler. I looked up at him and he smiled. Of course i smiled back like a stupid love sick girl. "Nervous?" He was laughing! "N-no." ...
Apr 13, 2008 -
Re: 30 Minutes in heaven
Oh Fuck! Are you kidding me? I just sat there a minuet hoping to crumple up my number. Tyler went up to wait. Double fuck! I stood up slowly and ...
Apr 13, 2008 -
Re: My Vampire
I didn't think it sounded very much like Stephine Meyer... I liked it alot. I'm really into vampires and this was a great take on them. will you be continuing ...
Apr 13, 2008 -
Re: 30 Minutes in heaven
I didn't understand why Sam thought it was so funny. I for one was disgusted as i saw Genna hand Tyler the papers one by one. Sam and I had ...
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Re: 30 Minutes in heaven
I watched as the boys raced towards Genna. ' Idiots ' I thought. All they ever want is sex or sex related activities... Bella looked on in disgust as Johnothan ...
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Re: 30 Minutes in heaven
When Samantha let me pick a number i pulled out a 2. I wonder what the numbers are for... I looked up from my number in time to see Tyler ...
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Re: Keri's love Chapter One Part One (Redone)
I love romances and this one is very interesting so far. I want to know what Ryder was going to say when he said: “Rules of th…” He stopped, “Of ...
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Re: A Clean Bite--Prologue[rewrite]
Prologue “I’ve loved you since freshman year. I want us to be together. I love you.” She told him everything. She’d kept it in for a long time but she ...
Apr 13, 2008
