Vampy_Girl15

** Hey I thought we couldn't use magic in the cages, or is that just Jaskar's?**

Wow, it's great. I loved it. It kind of shocked me... Medusa mentioned the only mistakes I saw. very good job. :D Keep writing! ~Rachael

Thanks so much! I'll apply your critiques. Yeah, I know that there are a lot of mistakes. I forgot to save it when I revised, sorry. The rest will be ...

He wasn't afraid! I was beaming! I'd never met anyone who was okay about it when they found out about me. He was tired and asked to go to sleep. ...

"Do you?" I asked. I'd never felt so free to do whatever I wanted. I felt totally different. Was I becoming like Genna? I didn't think I was but maybe... ...

I stopped when we reached a small cave at the other end of the island. I laid down and Tex slid off me, just staring. I sighed. He looked really ...

I awoke in what looked like a small metal cage. My head was throbbing and It hurt to move very much. I saw where I had been cut, it was ...

"Well I'm up for anything." I told Tyler. He was looking very devious, and I liked it. "You know Sam has a hot tub out back." I said giving a ...

He was kissing me so intensly I thought I'd pass out. He tighted his arms around me, pressing us closer. When he pulled back to look at my face I ...

Ah come on! This was so not happening. I took a deep breath and ran into the pack of tabbies. I felt claws scratch at my back. I growled each ...

When Robbie wouldn't talk to me I left him alone. He looked like he was about to kill the world. I hoped he'd come talk to me once he realized ...

Ugh! that stupid cat! I thought. He's probably scared out of his wits and now I'm just about to make it wrose. I started to run after her and turned ...

"You bitch!" I yelled, "Let him got. He's not your next snack!" I ran after her, my throat hurt like hell. She was familiar, but I didn't know why... I ...

When Tex grabbed my hand he looked surprised. I knew he would, all humans do. I heard a girl's voice calling him. Suddenly he pulled me closer and whispered 'stay ...

Splash! I looked over to see a boy about a foot away. He looked terrified. Actually I was too, I had no Idea how I got here. One minute I ...