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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Get back on the horse

    I liked the discripitve words you used. :D I'm a sucker for great vocaulary. I liked the message you were sending. Like Andrea said, it's something people relate to. Great ...

    Mon Apr 28, 2008 10:42 pm
  • Archive Re: v vs w II

    I walked down the corridor smiling. He had given me hope. I came to my door just as the searchers did. They bowed, "We've found her Blair-sama." I walked over ...

    Mon Apr 28, 2008 10:23 pm
  • Archive Re: Fantasy Acadamy Modernized.

    Lottie~ "Of course, it is a magic school." I said smiling. "Just watch." I slid into the pond and the bright light surrounded me. Soon she was gaping at my ...

    Mon Apr 28, 2008 9:52 pm
  • Archive Re: v vs w II

    I sighed. He didn't want me the way I wanted him. I felt sorry for him, he had lost his wife and was now being forced to marry me. It ...

    Mon Apr 28, 2008 9:47 pm
  • Romantic Novels Re: Unloved- Chapter 2 Dilemma (edited)

    This is really the only thing I noticed: 'The last in its row, locker number 399 seemed different than normally.' It just doesn't sound right. Maybe say something like. 'The ...

    Mon Apr 28, 2008 6:01 pm
  • Archive Re: Shugo Chara

    "So how are you today?" I asked ignoring Casey. "I'd say a little better than you." She said smiling. "I'd bet money you were." We walked down to the school ...

    Mon Apr 28, 2008 5:46 pm
  • Archive Re: v vs w II

    **Yeah! That'd be cool. I'm sorry that I haven't posted. I was at the hospital.** Lucinda~ I called searchers in; explaining what they had to do. "Find her! She around ...

    Mon Apr 28, 2008 5:24 pm
  • Archive Re: v vs w II

    **Maki your in my chambers. Didn't you read the stuff written?**

    Sun Apr 27, 2008 11:43 pm
  • Archive Re: The Island

    An apology, a white rose meant for us to forgive him. "Pitiful?" I asked. "Yes, pitiful. No vamps do that anymore. He's going to get help now." I sat down ...

    Sun Apr 27, 2008 11:32 pm
  • Archive Re: FMFSC the II

    "Do you know which you'll pick?" I asked quietly. I didn't want her to get mad, I just wanted to know. I'd never known her to like either part of ...

    Sun Apr 27, 2008 11:28 pm
  • Archive Re: Shugo Chara

    Name: Naomi Casing Age: 13 Gender: Female Grade: 8th Shugo Chara(s): 1 Personallity: She is quiet and what you would call emo. Her music choice is rock, alterative, metal, screamo, ...

    Sun Apr 27, 2008 11:26 pm
  • Archive Re: v vs w II

    Lucinda~ I sat there thinking about the days events. One of the girls had gone off on a wolf hunt. I had no quarell with them at the moment but ...

    Sun Apr 27, 2008 11:08 pm
  • Archive Re: v vs w II

    **who's going to be the werewolf leader?**

    Sun Apr 27, 2008 10:42 pm
  • Archive Re: Bio Hazard

    "Hot and ready to be done with all this. Other wise, fine." I said sarcasticly. I heard people around, live people. "Can you hear that? Follow me." I ran around ...

    Sun Apr 27, 2008 10:23 pm
  • Archive Re: Fantasy Acadamy Modernized.

    Carlisle~ "You know you enjoy when she teases you." I said, laughing. "She likes you a lot you know." I fixed myself a cup of coffee and sat with him. ...

    Sun Apr 27, 2008 10:15 pm


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