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Re: Get back on the horse
I liked the discripitve words you used. :D I'm a sucker for great vocaulary. I liked the message you were sending. Like Andrea said, it's something people relate to. Great ...
Mon Apr 28, 2008 10:42 pm -
Re: v vs w II
I walked down the corridor smiling. He had given me hope. I came to my door just as the searchers did. They bowed, "We've found her Blair-sama." I walked over ...
Mon Apr 28, 2008 10:23 pm -
Re: Fantasy Acadamy Modernized.
Lottie~ "Of course, it is a magic school." I said smiling. "Just watch." I slid into the pond and the bright light surrounded me. Soon she was gaping at my ...
Mon Apr 28, 2008 9:52 pm -
Re: v vs w II
I sighed. He didn't want me the way I wanted him. I felt sorry for him, he had lost his wife and was now being forced to marry me. It ...
Mon Apr 28, 2008 9:47 pm -
Re: Unloved- Chapter 2 Dilemma (edited)
This is really the only thing I noticed: 'The last in its row, locker number 399 seemed different than normally.' It just doesn't sound right. Maybe say something like. 'The ...
Mon Apr 28, 2008 6:01 pm -
Re: Shugo Chara
"So how are you today?" I asked ignoring Casey. "I'd say a little better than you." She said smiling. "I'd bet money you were." We walked down to the school ...
Mon Apr 28, 2008 5:46 pm -
Re: v vs w II
**Yeah! That'd be cool. I'm sorry that I haven't posted. I was at the hospital.** Lucinda~ I called searchers in; explaining what they had to do. "Find her! She around ...
Mon Apr 28, 2008 5:24 pm -
Re: v vs w II
**Maki your in my chambers. Didn't you read the stuff written?**
Sun Apr 27, 2008 11:43 pm -
Re: The Island
An apology, a white rose meant for us to forgive him. "Pitiful?" I asked. "Yes, pitiful. No vamps do that anymore. He's going to get help now." I sat down ...
Sun Apr 27, 2008 11:32 pm -
Re: FMFSC the II
"Do you know which you'll pick?" I asked quietly. I didn't want her to get mad, I just wanted to know. I'd never known her to like either part of ...
Sun Apr 27, 2008 11:28 pm -
Re: Shugo Chara
Name: Naomi Casing Age: 13 Gender: Female Grade: 8th Shugo Chara(s): 1 Personallity: She is quiet and what you would call emo. Her music choice is rock, alterative, metal, screamo, ...
Sun Apr 27, 2008 11:26 pm -
Re: v vs w II
Lucinda~ I sat there thinking about the days events. One of the girls had gone off on a wolf hunt. I had no quarell with them at the moment but ...
Sun Apr 27, 2008 11:08 pm -
Re: v vs w II
**who's going to be the werewolf leader?**
Sun Apr 27, 2008 10:42 pm -
Re: Bio Hazard
"Hot and ready to be done with all this. Other wise, fine." I said sarcasticly. I heard people around, live people. "Can you hear that? Follow me." I ran around ...
Sun Apr 27, 2008 10:23 pm -
Re: Fantasy Acadamy Modernized.
Carlisle~ "You know you enjoy when she teases you." I said, laughing. "She likes you a lot you know." I fixed myself a cup of coffee and sat with him. ...
Sun Apr 27, 2008 10:15 pm
